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Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED22 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRES: ROMANCE, SCHOOLLIFE, DRAMA, FRIENDSHIP, FLUFF
CHARACTERS: EXO YIXING | BYUNG HYEONRI (OC)
CHAPTER COUNT: 16
STORY DESCRIPTION: Once the plan is set for Byun Hyeonri to seduce class’s ‘Gay’, Zhang Yixing. She is dropped into the story filled with betrayal, distrust and scheming. First heartbreak then murder and most importantly a marriage. Just a bet, one single bet caused her to be in the deep danger.
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oh, and i'm terribly sorry for the very late post!
SEDUCING MRGAY story LINK | CREAMCOLOURED- | MARCH 22, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) that main idea
what drove me from the very start was that main idea you got where yixing was gay. it was a semi-fresh concept for me, and it was really intriguing since i can't imagine yixing as gay. lol. nevertheless, i do hope that you focus a bit more on hyeonri since her character was a bit confusing and misleading a few times. she's the main character, too, so more information and details please.
(2) that title
i'll have to give you two thumbs up for your title. yes, it may be a very cliche title here on asianfanfics, but it was worth it. from the genres included in your story, it was really fitting, and the fact that mr. gay was there and with yixing on the poster, it was really enticing! as i've said on your first strength, i really can't imaging yixing being gay. the fact that you used an effective title means that you'll get more readers
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