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Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED14 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRE/S: ANGST, MYSTERY
MAIN CHARACTERS: KIM JAEJOONG AND JUNG YUNHO
CHAPTER COUNT: ONESHOT
STORY DESCRIPTION: RIGHT AFTER DECIDING TO END HIS CURRENT LIFE IN FOUR DAYS, KIM JAEJOONG FINDS A NEW PERSONAL ASSISTANT. IT HAPPENS TO BE JUNG YUNHO. THE MAN INTIMIDATES JAEJOONG BUT THEY END UP TOGETHER. KIM JAEJOONG IS NOT EXACTLY HUMAN AND FALLS IN LOVE FOR THE FIRST T
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STRENGTHS:
(1) THAT VERY MEANINGFUL TITLE
WHAT I LIKE THE MOST WAS HOW MEANINGFUL YOUR TITLE WAS. I BELIEVE THAT IT FITS THE STORY WHOLLY, AND THE ENDING REALLY DID HAVE THAT SIGNIFICANCE THAT I WAS LOOKING FOR. IT WAS A GOOD THING THAT YOU GAVE US A MEANING OF THAT TITLE IN YOUR FOREWORD, TOO, THOUGH i THINK IT WOULD BE BETTER TO PLACE IT AT THE BEGINNING SO THAT THOSE PEOPLE WHO HAVE NO IDEA WOULD READ THE MEANING IMMEDIATELY, IF YOU GET WHAT I MEAN.
(2) THOSE LAST STATEMENTS
THOSE STATEMENTS REGARDING GOD AND THE WHOLE HUMAN RACE HAD LEFT AN IMPACT FOR ME, AS IF GIVING ME A WHOLE ROUND OF RECOGNITION. TO SAY THE LEAST, I COULDN'T HELP BUT AGREE MORE. IT WAS TRUE. GOD REALLY DID BECOME A MAN BEFORE AND GREW HIMSELF A HEART YET IT ATE HIM ALIVE. IN RELATION TO JAEJOONG, I CAN UNDERSTAND HIS FEELINGS AND WHATNOT, BUT THEN AGAIN, THAT IS A PART OF LIFE, AND I BELIEVE THAT THAT'S UNAVOIDABLE. YOU DID A GOOD JOB AT THE ENDING, THOUGH. NICE!
(3) JAEJOONG = GOD
WHAT SURPRISED ME WAS THAT TWISTS AT THE END. I HAD EXPECTED THE TYPICAL STORY, TO BE HONEST, AND WAS SURPRISED WHEN I DISCOVERED THAT GOD WAS, AGAIN, IN EARTH IN THE FORM OF JAEJOONG, ONLY BECAUSE OF BOREDOM FROM HIS JOB BEING "GOD." IT WAS TOTALLY UNEXPECTED, AND I ASSUMED THAT HE WAS LIKE THE TYPICAL SUPERNATURAL DEMON OR ANYTHING WITH POWERS AND WHATNOT. YOU REALLY SURPRISED ME THERE, AND SOMEHOW, YOUR STORY TAUGHT ME SOME
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