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Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED17 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRE/S: ROMANCE, DRAMA
MAIN CHARACTERS: KIM YOOMI (OC), PARK CHANYEOL
CHAPTER COUNT: ONESHOT
STORY DESCRIPTION: Yoomi wanted to believe she could have a perfect relationship. She's set so many expectations and goals for her first romance, yet she says she's not obsessed about finding love. She just wants it to come naturally, and when it does, then she wants it to be perfect. But after a while, she realizes that she can't have the seemingly perfect first relationship she always wished for and forces herself to stop thinking otherwise to face the reality of how imperfect this relationship is.
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THE COMPLETED CHAPTER story LINK | SWEETSONATA | FEB. 17, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) that poem = <3
the most wonderful element that i found the best was that poem. i'm kind of a er for poems, especially meaningful ones, and the fact that the poem has somehow appeared to be simple and straight-forward, yet very much meaningful in the story was really superb! not anyone can pull that off well. Good job!
(2) simplicity
let's be honest here. the story was short, simple, yet wise. it gave off a lot of moral lessons in the end, and i guess that the simplicity of the story would help more readers to easily understand what the story was all about. plus, a lot of people can relate that. heck, a lot of readers here on aff are females! i think almost all of the readers are females, and we experience first loves of course, so the story has a very high potential of getting read.
(3) vocabulary and comprehension
one of the pros of your story
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