☑ snowflake16 & gaksitalGaksital
Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED24 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRE/S: drama, romance, angst, comedy, supernatural, alternate universe, political.
MAIN CHARACTERS: kris wu, suho, eunmi (oc) and bae suzy
STATUS: on-going
CHAPTER COUNT: 8 CHAPTERS
STORY DESCRIPTION: “For Alice it was a burrow, for Dorothy it was a hurricane, for Suho and Kris it’s a mirror that brings them to another world. Gone are the days of mocking each other over ‘alien super powers’ and silly stage names because now Joon Myun and Yi Fan must find a way to go return to their own world with the aid of of their new-found alien powers. Mastering powers isn’t easy especially on a sick stomach of bad diets and loud, arrogant side kicks but what else can heroes do? Help comes in all forms for under-equipped heroes and help can exist as rabbits, lions, scarecrows or even beautiful ladies. Time is ticking, love is blooming, evil is at work, danger lurks in the most unexpected places and it’s up to two unlikely heroes to save the day. The only problem is that nothing is what it seems because in this world there are parallel crossings.”
HERE ARE A FEW REMINDERS PRIOR TO THIS REVIEW. FIRST OF ALL, DON'T FORGET TO CREDIT THE SHOP -- EITHER THE SHOP OR ME, YEOLWHO05, SO AS TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE EFFORT IN PROVIDING YOU THIS REVIEW. SECONDLY, MAKE SURE TO COMMENT AFTER PICKING YOUR REVIEW. DO PROVIDE YOUR FEEDBACK, IF POSSIBLE, AS WELL. i'D LIKE TO KNOW YOUR THOUGHTS ABOUT MY REVIEW, LIKE DID I SAY SOMETHING WRONG OR SOMETHING, OR WOULD YOU LIKE TO DEFEND YOUR STORY, ETC.? I'D BE GLAD TO ANSWER THEM ALL. ^^
BEYOND THE REFLECTION story LINK | SNOWFLAKE16 AND GAKSITALGAKSITAL | JAN. 27, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) VERY PROMISING WRITING STYLE
I REALLY FOUND YOUR WRITING STYLE PROMISING, ESPECIALLY SINCE YOU MADE ME LAUGH THROUGHOUT THE TIME. I HAD ALSO READ THROUGH YOUR READERS' COMMENTS, AND WOW. I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE. KRIS' CHARACTER HAD MADE ME LAUGH MOST OF THE TIME, ESPECIALLY IN THE HALLUCINATION-LIKE CHAPTER... AND THAT FART ONE AS WELL. KUDOS TO THAT. HECK, HE WAS LIKE THE TYPICAL, AWKWARD KRIS IN REAL LIFE. GOOD JOB IN PORTRAYING THE CHARACTERS WELL!
(2) THE THEME OF THE STORY
to be quite honest, i was never a bi
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