☑ eunjieun14
Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED18 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRES: angst, fluff, romance, supernatural
CHARACTERS: iu, myungsoo, infinite, exo
CHAPTER COUNT: 10
STORY DESCRIPTION: ... Soon enough, both of them met and L successfully erased the girl's memory and sent her back to Earth. Well, he thought he succeeded already. Truthfully? No. Rather, it was a mess. And it was his responsibility to fix that mess. The only way he would be able to do so is to travel to Earth and find her. No matter what it would take, he had to complete this mission.
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the man from paradise story LINK | eunjieun14 | MARCH 18, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) show and don't tell
one of the things that i loved was that you showed us rather than telling us. you didn't lack on this department. it would've been bad if you kept on narrating the scenes to us rather than describing them deeper, especially with your story being a supernatural-focused one.
(2) that plot
i love the plot, actually. you mixed the genres that i mostly like in stories, so that's definitely a plus for me. i have read a story about angels before though, so some of the scenes might've come as predictable for me, but nevertheless, your chapters were really intriguing that i just kept on reading, and the fact that l failed with erasing jieun's memory and everything be
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