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Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED13 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRES: COMEDY, FAMILY, SITCOM, FLUFF, CRACK
CHARACTERS: JIHYE (OC), AND BTS
CHAPTER COUNT: 9
STORY DESCRIPTION: A DIARY WRITTEN BY A SISTER WITH SEVEN ANNOYING BROTHERS AND HOW SHE DEALS WITH THEM.
HERE ARE A FEW REMINDERS PRIOR TO THIS REVIEW. FIRST OF ALL, DON'T FORGET TO CREDIT THE SHOP, EITHER THE SHOP OR ME, YEOLWHO05, SO AS TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE EFFORT IN PROVIDING YOU THIS REVIEW. SECONDLY, MAKE SURE TO COMMENT AFTER PICKING YOUR REVIEW. DO PROVIDE YOUR FEEDBACK, IF POSSIBLE, AS WELL. i'D LIKE TO KNOW YOUR THOUGHTS ABOUT MY REVIEW, LIKE DID I SAY SOMETHING WRONG OR SOMETHING, OR WOULD YOU LIKE TO DEFEND YOUR STORY, ETC.? HOWEVER, DON'T BE TOO HARSH ON IT. IF POSSIBLE, DIRECTLY MESSAGE ME IF YOU WANT TO DEFEND SOMETHING EXTREMELY INTENSE, IF YOU GET WHAT I MEAN.
oh, and i'm terribly sorry for the very late post!
DEAR DIARY, THIS HOUSE IS CHAOS story LINK | W3NTCHUUKROWN | MARCH 13, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) HUMOR
YOUR STORY HAS A LOT OF HUMOR. IT WAS ONE OF THE THINGS THAT I LIKED THE BEST WITH YOUR STORY. THERE WERE A LOT OF CUTE AND FUNNY MOMENTS, ESPECIALLY COMING FROM HER WEIRD AND INDIFFERENT BROTHERS WHO EACH HAD DISTINCT CHARACTERISTICS. IT WAS FUN TO SEE HOW JIHYE WAS A BIT DIFFERENT AS WELL. I WOULD'VE DOUBTED THE STORY IF SHE WAS AN EMO GIRL OR SOMETHING. I GUESS THE AB GENE GOT AROUND THE FAMILY. NEVERTHELESS, THOSE FUNNY MOMENTS WERE WHAT DROVE ME INTO CONTINUE READING YOUR STORY. GOOD JOB! I HOPE TO READ MORE OF IT IN YOUR FUTURE UPDATES!
(2) THEY'RE A "FAMILY."
I SERIOUSLY LOVE HOW THE "FAMILY" GENRE WASN'T SO FOCUSED AT, YET THEY ARE. I WAS TOUCHED FROM A FEW PARTS, ESPECIALLY WHEN HER BROTHERS SHOWED THEIR CARING SIDES, EVEN IN A WEIRD WAY. IT SHOWED HOW THEY LOVE THEIR SISTER, EVEN THOUGH THEY DENY IT. I GUESS I'LL BE HOPING TO READ SOME DRAMA IN THE FUTURE, SINCE THEY CAN'T GO ALL LOVEY DOVEY IN THE FUTURE. RIGHT?
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