Title : (7/10)

Your title fits the description really really well and it also doesn't look that bland,surprisingly. It might or might not catch the readers' attention but those who probably likes to read angst and death stories will read yours,so 7 points!

Description&Foreword : (10/10)

Your description was perfect,so was your foreword. I like how you describe your fic in a way that the readers want to read more and I also like how you put Yuri's thinking thoughts in the foreword...how should I say it...like um,'Dear Kris' and such. It's nice and unique and I so love the trailer,it's like the creator herself/himself recorded themself saying the phrases included instead,it's like really cool. So yeah,perfect score for this!

Grammar&Language : (20/20)

I don't know what to say about this...but this is one of the rare times where I couldn't spot any grammar nor language errors at all. I was frantically searching for some,but kind of failed. It's either there really isn't any,or i'm blind orrrr i'm not as good in grammar and language as you are. It's perfect and gahhh,I guess you must've proofread it a couple of times right? Since it's for a competition. And your choice of words wasn't so dull,it was kind of highly advanced,I envy you. I wish I can write as good as you though ;_; 

Character : (20/20)

There isn't any part of the characters where I find that is lacking or that I didn't understand. Another full score for a 20 point section,that's just perfect. The elaboration of their personalities wasn't really obviously stated,but anyone can tell in overall when they read the story,such talent are rare.

Flow of story : (10/10)

Another perfect score. Wow. Everything was paced perfectly equally and there isn't any part of the story that I didn't understand,there wasn't any part of the story which was rushing too fast and I find it amazing how you brought Saehee's death like that. I'm not good at writing deaths but when I do,it's usually rushed and messy o_e Since it's a full score,I have nothing else to say.

Originality&Storyline : (10/10)

Perfect,again! I have never seen any plot like this,I don't really read that much books but your fic is a total first of all the fanfics i've ever read. It's just so unique that how a dying fangirl meant so much to Kris,and that golden medal she won for him...and the letter pictures,your story and layout was really creative and it was beautifully written.

Overall : (77/80)

I didn't even know why you needed reviewing,it was clearly close to perfection and this review was so short o_e maybe it's because it's for a competition eh? xD Honestly I entered my entry for the same competition and after I read your story I totally lost all the confidence in believing I could win,because how can I win over your fic /fake sobs/ I love the plot and the way you write so much that I didn't really care about the characters,ya know. In my previous reviews I somehow have stated I didn't like EXO,but when I read your story,I was so engrossed in it that I didn't really care who was the characters. I hope you win! Please remember to credit the shop in your foreword so that I can cancel your name off the list. Thank you for requesting at KMS & HMH Review Shop! Have a nice day ^~^