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Broken Wings (Sequel of : Your Promises) - DISCONTINUED
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Clarification : Ga Eun traveled to the past back when Jongin’s still in high school means he didn’t recgonized her because he never met her before. She didn’t travel to the future but to the past, just to explain the story so you wont be confuse ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Second day at school as a new student definitely not as easy as what you thought it will be. Some people start to spread those insane rumors about you flirting with your teacher just to skip PE class, that you’re having a dangerous viruses because of your too fair skin, that you’re actually flirting with Jongin just because of his money and his body. Oh please..

 

And now here you are..

 

Sighing while mopping the school hall, in the other word, detention. Though you’re tired because those crazy people won’t stop walking around just to make sure you won’t finish it, and you’re also hungry since you have to spend your break time for the detention. “Whoops, sorry.” A girl student giggled and waved after she stomped her dirty shoes on the floor.

 

“Whatever..” You muttered under your breath as you plugged your rilakkuma earphone to your ear. Now the world feels like heaven without any voices from satan’s kids. The bell rang few minutes later and all the students rushed back to their classes. You? Of course, still mopping the hall while bobbing your head at the same rhythm as the music.

 

About twenty minutes later, the hall looks really clean and shining. A smile of satisfied flash across your face. Finall—

 

A dirty basket ball rolled to your way and touched your shoes. Your smile faded after you saw the muddy trace because of the ball on your precious and lovely shining hall. “….YaaAAAH!” You shouted angrily as you pulled your earphone, searching for the owner of the ball.

 

“Sorry.” The owner of the ball said casually as he bend down to took the ball.

 

Your bloods boil even more when you noticed it was Kim freaking Jongin. He stand casually infront of you while holding the ball close to his right waist, he stared at you with one of his eyebrow raised, “What?”

 

“What? WHAT? Can’t you see I just finished mopping this god-damn hall and your ball— UGH!” You took a deep breath and slammed your mop back to the floor before you begin to mop it all over again, cursing at everyone and everything while scrubbing the dirty muds off the floor angrily.

 

Jongin, cocked his head to the side to take a look of your pissed face. His corner lips formed a small smirk before he walk around, “Hey, this side, clean it.” He tsk-ed then walk to the other side, “Tch, this floor still looks dirty.” Shooking his head, he walk again to the other side, “Can’t you do it properl—“

 

“AAAAAAH.” You gasped loudly when you saw the hall was filled with his muddy foot prints, “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY LOVELY HALL?? YOU—“

 

“Are you going to cuss at me now? I thought you’re an angel, hm?” He smirked.

 

You jutted your lower lips and begin to mop his dirty foot prints with a sob. “…Just go away and don’t come back, you son of satan.” Jongin blinked and pressed his lips together trying to held back his laughter as he watches your kiddy attitude.

 

Jongin nodded his head as he watches your movement. He then sit on the table while swinging his legs like a little kid. You took a glance at him and clicked your tongue, “What are you doing here? Break time is over, go to your class.” Jongin threw the ball up to the air and catch it again, too busy playing with the ball, ignoring your words.

 

“Tch. Jerk.” You muttered under your breath as you rolled your eyes at him.

 

Putting his ball aside, Jongin took

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Winterberry04 #1
Chapter 22: Please update soon!! Loving it!!
monmons #2
Chapter 22: what? why dont u updated. i demand the next chapter. like.now! authornim!! :(
king_belle
#3
Chapter 22: oh my godd this is such a good and well written story. i love the plot TT so sad we'll never know what happened to jongin and ga eun.
ExoLBtsArmy #4
Chapter 2: I came here a day after Jonghyun died and when I read there a character name Jonghyun , I tried to be positive and think thats must be different Jonghyun but then the world hits me . Jjong . It makes sense . Its him . But yeah , your story is good . Keep it up :)
chantokkl
#5
This definitely have the potential to be a great story sad to see it got discontinued :( but it's your choice. Since it's still up, i hope one day you get inspired and maybe you can update this? :D
Halme0ni
#6
Re-reading this!
kairiExo
#7
Chapter 22: i think this story will be featured if you write till ending but i cant force you.
Anyway, it is a nice story~
ExoticShawolinSpirit
#8
Chapter 22: Can we at least know how you would've ended it? :O
-kimmyeons #9
Chapter 22: I've been waiting for an update for such a long time. Way before I know how to speak proper english goddamn it. But it couldn't be help and it saddens me to not know whether they will stay as lovers or not because Your Promises break me over and over and over again after re-reading it again for a million times. I just want to say thank you and I am very disappointed that you have decide to discontinue this fic, this amazing journey of knowing the story in the beginning. Love it, and thank you.
everythingedible #10
Chapter 22: Well very sad... But i guess it can't be helped after all