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Broken Wings (Sequel of : Your Promises) - DISCONTINUED
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“What are you doing here, sunbae?”

 

“I was about to pay you a visit when I saw you.” He said. “Pay me a visit?” You stared at him with your questioning look. “Mm.” He hums along with a nod.

 

“Why?”

 

“I just feel like it.” He chuckles to himself, “I’ll go buy some meds for your scars. Wait here.”

 

Before you could say anything, he already left. Sitting on the bench near the backyard, you pushed your right hand out while staring at the dark gloomy sky. As the cold rain hit your hand, a sigh escaped your lips.

 

“I haven’t make any progress yet time is ticking.” You muttered under your breath. Then your eyes landed on the scars on your knees.  “What a jerk.”

 

Checking your wet bag, your brows knitted when you realized you forgot to bring your phone with you. No wonder why you feel like something’s missing. Sighing, you were about to get up and leave when you remembered about that sunbaenim, “Ah . I wonder how long I should wait.” You sighs.

 

The sky’s getting darker and darker, the rain also didn’t show any sign it will stop soon. It’s starting to get cold when the breezes hit your wet body. You wrapped your arms around your body, trying to find some warmth, even if it’s just a little.

 

“KYA!”

 

You gasped and shut your eyes tightly in reflect when there’s a loud thunder sound. Covering both your ears with your palms, you get off of the bench and squated down. Your knees stings, you knew your scars just bleed again because of your sudden move.

 

“Damn. Sunbae please hurry.” You mumbled while still burrying your face between your knees.

 

Seems like heaven is not on your side that day. The thunders are getting louder and louder like it’s going to hit your head in any seconds. “It’s scary-“ You mumbled as your eyes started to get teary.

 

..Huh?

 

You slowly opened your eyes when the thunder sounds are slowly faded. When you looked up, Jongin was there.

 

He squated infr

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Winterberry04 #1
Chapter 22: Please update soon!! Loving it!!
monmons #2
Chapter 22: what? why dont u updated. i demand the next chapter. like.now! authornim!! :(
king_belle
#3
Chapter 22: oh my godd this is such a good and well written story. i love the plot TT so sad we'll never know what happened to jongin and ga eun.
ExoLBtsArmy #4
Chapter 2: I came here a day after Jonghyun died and when I read there a character name Jonghyun , I tried to be positive and think thats must be different Jonghyun but then the world hits me . Jjong . It makes sense . Its him . But yeah , your story is good . Keep it up :)
chantokkl
#5
This definitely have the potential to be a great story sad to see it got discontinued :( but it's your choice. Since it's still up, i hope one day you get inspired and maybe you can update this? :D
Halme0ni
#6
Re-reading this!
kairiExo
#7
Chapter 22: i think this story will be featured if you write till ending but i cant force you.
Anyway, it is a nice story~
ExoticShawolinSpirit
#8
Chapter 22: Can we at least know how you would've ended it? :O
-kimmyeons #9
Chapter 22: I've been waiting for an update for such a long time. Way before I know how to speak proper english goddamn it. But it couldn't be help and it saddens me to not know whether they will stay as lovers or not because Your Promises break me over and over and over again after re-reading it again for a million times. I just want to say thank you and I am very disappointed that you have decide to discontinue this fic, this amazing journey of knowing the story in the beginning. Love it, and thank you.
everythingedible #10
Chapter 22: Well very sad... But i guess it can't be helped after all