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Broken Wings (Sequel of : Your Promises) - DISCONTINUED
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“Hatchoo!”

 

 

After english class comes PE class. You keep sneezing while walking to the nearest girl restroom to change your uniform. Your knees still hurts so let’s just hope the teacher won’t ask you to do anything stupid this time.

 

“You don’t look well. Why don’t you just skip the class, Ga Eun-ah? I’ll tell the teacher that you’re not feeling well.” Soojin has been busy passing you some tissues since the first class. You just nodded while covering your itchy nose with the tissue she gave you, about to sneeze again, “I’m okay.”

 

“But your knees are not okay, girl.” She pointed at your knees with her judging eyes, “It’s nothing, I still can run faster than you.” Soojin rolled her eyes at you while giggling.

 

After you changed your uniform, you were clinging on to Soojin’s arm while walking to the field. Soojin took care of you like a nagging mom, she also flicked your head once in a time.

 

“Ga Eun!”

 

You turned your head to the right when you heard someone called you. “Sunbaenim!” You called him back. “I’m so sorry I left earlier yesterday. A friend of mine forced me to go home with him.”

 

“It’s okay. I’m glad you’re fine now.” He smiled, “Do you still have class?”

 

You nodded, “PE class. I’m on my way to the field actually.. Oh yes- Sunbaenim, this is my friend, Soojin. And Soojin, this is Jaejoong sunbaenim.” They both smiled at each other before bowing a little.

 

“So what are you doing here, sunbae? To pay me another visit?” He laughed at how you wiggled your brows playfully. “Too bad, not today, Ga Eun. I’m here to have a little talk with the principle. But I won’t deny that either.” He smiled.

 

While having a small conversation with Jaejoong, you couldn’t help to turn your head around when you heard some laughing sound from your back.

 

Jongin was walking with his friends while laughing at Baekhyun’s joke. The moment when you turned around, your eyes met his. He slowed down a little when he saw you.

 

You secretly cussed at him for being too good looking that day. With his hair covering his forehead, both of his hands inside his pants’ pocket, and that button on his upper shirt that didn’t get attached, revealing his neck. You’d be lying if you say you’re not attracted to that jerk.

 

He frowns when he saw Jaejoong who was standing beside you, then his eyes landed on yours again. He noticed how you keep staring at him and that makes his lips curled up into a small smirk.

 

Jongin said something to his friends, probably you guys go first or I’ll catch up with you later because his friends waved at him before he left.

 

.  You muttered under your breath when you saw he was walking right

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Winterberry04 #1
Chapter 22: Please update soon!! Loving it!!
monmons #2
Chapter 22: what? why dont u updated. i demand the next chapter. like.now! authornim!! :(
king_belle
#3
Chapter 22: oh my godd this is such a good and well written story. i love the plot TT so sad we'll never know what happened to jongin and ga eun.
ExoLBtsArmy #4
Chapter 2: I came here a day after Jonghyun died and when I read there a character name Jonghyun , I tried to be positive and think thats must be different Jonghyun but then the world hits me . Jjong . It makes sense . Its him . But yeah , your story is good . Keep it up :)
chantokkl
#5
This definitely have the potential to be a great story sad to see it got discontinued :( but it's your choice. Since it's still up, i hope one day you get inspired and maybe you can update this? :D
Halme0ni
#6
Re-reading this!
kairiExo
#7
Chapter 22: i think this story will be featured if you write till ending but i cant force you.
Anyway, it is a nice story~
ExoticShawolinSpirit
#8
Chapter 22: Can we at least know how you would've ended it? :O
-kimmyeons #9
Chapter 22: I've been waiting for an update for such a long time. Way before I know how to speak proper english goddamn it. But it couldn't be help and it saddens me to not know whether they will stay as lovers or not because Your Promises break me over and over and over again after re-reading it again for a million times. I just want to say thank you and I am very disappointed that you have decide to discontinue this fic, this amazing journey of knowing the story in the beginning. Love it, and thank you.
everythingedible #10
Chapter 22: Well very sad... But i guess it can't be helped after all