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Broken Wings (Sequel of : Your Promises) - DISCONTINUED
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“Are you sure you want to do this?”

 

“…Yes.”

 

“But why? Don’t you want to rest peacefully here? With me and the others?”

“…But I can’t let him live a life like this. He won’t stop being drunk shouting at his wife, he can’t work properly and his family’s bussiness is getting near to bankrupt. I…I’m the one who made him like this.. And I have to fix it..”

 

“Fine.. But once you’re being reborn to the world, everyone will forgot about you. You will be completely erased from their minds and memories.. He won’t recgonized you anymore.”

 

“I know.”

 

A pair of warm arms wrapped around you shoulder, his long fingers caressed every strands of your hair softly, “Good luck..” He whispered softly before he pulled himself away, taking some steps backward to meet your eyes. The huge white door behind you creaked opened and you turned around to its direction.

 

Just one last step..

 

And you’ll be reborn to the cruel world.

 

You turned your head around and smiled at him, “Thank you, Yifan..” You whispered softly before you closed your eyes and walk passed the shining door. Inside your heart and mind, you keep thinking about lots of things.

 

First meeting at the café?

 

No..

 

First kiss?

 

No..

 

First date?

 

No..

 

“Have you decided, my dear?” A soft motherly voice came out of no where. You stayed silent for a few moments before you finally decided, “Yes..”

 

“I want.….”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The last thing that you remembered was yourself being hit by a strong breezes, you shut your eyes to prevent the winds to hurt your eyes and when you opened your eyes, you’ve become a new human. With your new life, and your new family, and also your new friends. With everything that you never had before. A middle aged woman was standing infront of you while waving her hand, “Ga Eun?? Honey, are you okay??”

 

You scanned everything around you slowly with your lips slightly parted, you’re inside a cozy house with a warm fireplace near the living room. You just realized that you’re standing in the dining room with three other people around.


“Honey? Are you not feeling well?” The same woman put her warm palm on your forehead. She then caressed your cheek softly while waiting for your answer. “…M-Mom…?” You whispered softly, still confused with the woman infront of you because you’ve never seen her before.  “…Dad..?” You then called the man with his hair that started to whiten, he looked up and smiled at you while nomming on his toast, “Yes, dear?” He said.

 

“Hey, brat.” A man with his handsome face clicked his tongue while staring at you from his seat, “Hurry up or you’ll be late for school.” He shook his head before your mom sitted you down on the empty seat across your brother.

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Winterberry04 #1
Chapter 22: Please update soon!! Loving it!!
monmons #2
Chapter 22: what? why dont u updated. i demand the next chapter. like.now! authornim!! :(
king_belle
#3
Chapter 22: oh my godd this is such a good and well written story. i love the plot TT so sad we'll never know what happened to jongin and ga eun.
ExoLBtsArmy #4
Chapter 2: I came here a day after Jonghyun died and when I read there a character name Jonghyun , I tried to be positive and think thats must be different Jonghyun but then the world hits me . Jjong . It makes sense . Its him . But yeah , your story is good . Keep it up :)
chantokkl
#5
This definitely have the potential to be a great story sad to see it got discontinued :( but it's your choice. Since it's still up, i hope one day you get inspired and maybe you can update this? :D
Halme0ni
#6
Re-reading this!
kairiExo
#7
Chapter 22: i think this story will be featured if you write till ending but i cant force you.
Anyway, it is a nice story~
ExoticShawolinSpirit
#8
Chapter 22: Can we at least know how you would've ended it? :O
-kimmyeons #9
Chapter 22: I've been waiting for an update for such a long time. Way before I know how to speak proper english goddamn it. But it couldn't be help and it saddens me to not know whether they will stay as lovers or not because Your Promises break me over and over and over again after re-reading it again for a million times. I just want to say thank you and I am very disappointed that you have decide to discontinue this fic, this amazing journey of knowing the story in the beginning. Love it, and thank you.
everythingedible #10
Chapter 22: Well very sad... But i guess it can't be helped after all