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Broken Wings (Sequel of : Your Promises) - DISCONTINUED
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“Jongin…”

 

“…How’d you know my name?”

 

 

 

 

 

“So…you’re telling me…that you’re an angel that came from the future…right?”

 

You swing your legs back and forth playfully while nomming on the chocolate bar Jongin gave you. Well, actually, you snatched it away from him, “Yup, that’s me.” You grinned as you throw the chocolate wraper to the bin in basket ball style, “Assa~” You clapped happily when you made a score. When you shifted your gaze back to Jongin, he was still staring at you with his eyebrows pinched, his hands are holding his cap with WOLF word printed on it.

 

“So…what are you doing here then? Aren’t you supposed to….fly or something?” Jongin raied an eyebrow along with his annoyed tone. You made an ugh sound as you rolled your eyes in frustration. The old Jongin and the Jongin you knew are just the same, they’re slow at thinking. Fool.

 

“Do I look like a bird or something? Besides—“ You crossed your arms close to your chest, “I’ve told you before. I’m here to make your dream comes true. Or you can say, I’m here to save your life.” You whispered the last sentence but loud enough for him to hear.

 

He gave you a questioning look as he took one step closer, there’s only curiousity in his eyes, “Save my life? What do you mean?”

Both of you stared into each other’s eyes. That dark brown eyes that used to be your world, your everything, now is nothing. You can’t even see your reflection or your life in his eyes. Right, he didn’t know you. Both of you are strangers.

 

It’s okay Jongin. Staring at you like this, it’s already more than enough for me.

 

“Do you really want to know?” You asked slowly and softly, trying to hide your shaky breath behind you poker face. He frowned and nodded his head.

 

Jongin always told you how much he loves dancing. It’s his life. He always wanted to be a famous dancer since he was in high school.   You know what, if I could turn back the time, I will definitely choose that audition over everything. I was too stupid that time, if only…   His words popped out in your head. Now that you already know what he will be in years ahead, should you change the whole history of his life?

 

“You won’t be a dancer.”

 

Your voice echo-ed through the empty room. Jongin seems to be pissed by your words because no one ever said that to him. Everyone adore him, everyone worship his dancing skills, he never fail to make those people who watch him dance jaw dropped in awe.  Everyone, except a weird stranger who claimed herself as a fallen angel.

 

He took a deep breath to wash his anger that start to crawl up through his veins, “Pardon?”

 

“You will not become a dancer. You’ll fail the audition and ended up working in your mom’s company which is .”

 

A loud bang sound almost make you jumped when Jongin slammed his palm on the wall behind you. You’re not trapped between his arms with his face only this far away from yours. He’s really really close that you realized he still has the same scents.  So you’ve been using your favorite perfume since high school hm Jongin?

 

“You don’t know anything about my mom and her company. She and her company are. not. . And I won’t have any damn problems if I have to work there beca—“

 

“You will have tons of problems if you didn’t pass the audition, Jongin.” You said followed with a deep sig

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Winterberry04 #1
Chapter 22: Please update soon!! Loving it!!
monmons #2
Chapter 22: what? why dont u updated. i demand the next chapter. like.now! authornim!! :(
king_belle
#3
Chapter 22: oh my godd this is such a good and well written story. i love the plot TT so sad we'll never know what happened to jongin and ga eun.
ExoLBtsArmy #4
Chapter 2: I came here a day after Jonghyun died and when I read there a character name Jonghyun , I tried to be positive and think thats must be different Jonghyun but then the world hits me . Jjong . It makes sense . Its him . But yeah , your story is good . Keep it up :)
chantokkl
#5
This definitely have the potential to be a great story sad to see it got discontinued :( but it's your choice. Since it's still up, i hope one day you get inspired and maybe you can update this? :D
Halme0ni
#6
Re-reading this!
kairiExo
#7
Chapter 22: i think this story will be featured if you write till ending but i cant force you.
Anyway, it is a nice story~
ExoticShawolinSpirit
#8
Chapter 22: Can we at least know how you would've ended it? :O
-kimmyeons #9
Chapter 22: I've been waiting for an update for such a long time. Way before I know how to speak proper english goddamn it. But it couldn't be help and it saddens me to not know whether they will stay as lovers or not because Your Promises break me over and over and over again after re-reading it again for a million times. I just want to say thank you and I am very disappointed that you have decide to discontinue this fic, this amazing journey of knowing the story in the beginning. Love it, and thank you.
everythingedible #10
Chapter 22: Well very sad... But i guess it can't be helped after all