Dance Practice

The Dancer Next Door

After Christine works her shifts in the law firm, she went straight to the dance studio to meet up with Peniel.

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 When she got there, she saw a shirtless Peniel who is sweating. He was wiping his face with a towel. After he drinks a bottle of water, he looks at Christine with an embarrassed face.

"Hey Christine, how long have you been standing there?" Peniel asked still wiping the sweat out of his forehead.

"I just came 2 minutes ago." Christine said while she sets her duffel bag down. Peniel goes to the closet to get some things. As Peniel got back from the closet, he sees Christine texting on her phone.

"Okay, put your phone down cause we're going to discuss about our dance routine and what we're going to wear for the competition." Peniel said.

"Fine" Christine said like she doesn't care.

"Well, I need to show you something" Peniel is about to touch her until Christine steps back.

"Woah, I think we should go through some procedures"

"Procedures?" Peniel asked tilting his head to the side.

"Yes which is going to be kinda long so you might want to sit down"

"Alright then" Peniel sits down

"First, you cannot touch me in the , the thigh, the and especially the lips."

"Fine, but how am I suppose to do that. Well I understand the part but I need to touch you everywhere else for the routines that we are doing"

"Fine, show me the video" Peniel gets his laptop and shows her the routines that him and Bora did. After the video, Christine makes an outburst.

"Oh hell no! You are not going to throw me up in the air and expect me to do a twirl in the air too. It also has a lot of body language!"

"That's what ballroom dancing is about Christine"

"Well, I thought ballroom dancing is like 1,2,3 and a 1,2,3 and a 1,2,3 kind of thing."

"Nope, now come on let's get dancing"


Peniel and Christine did their stretches and start working on the routine. Peniel guides her through the steps until Christine steps on the wrong foot.

"No Christine, you have to glide your left leg behind you not in front of you" Peniel said as he was demonstrating the dance steps.

"Alright, my legs are so tired"

"Okay, we're done for the day"

"Thank god!" Christine sits down and massages her legs. Suddenly, she felt that somebody is close to her and felt somebody rubbing her leg up and down. She looks up,saw Peniel with a smirk on his face and realizes how close they are.

"Are your legs tired? Cause you've been running through my mind all day" Peniel said.

"Oh my god Peniel!" She slaps his hand away from her leg.

"I'm sorry, it's just that I like it when you get angry" He puts his hand on her cheek and caresses it.

"Get away from me" She pushes Peniel away. 

"Wait, I still need to show you what we're going to wear for the competition" Peniel pulls out 4 dresses. He shows her the first one that looks like it shows too much skin.

"Mmm..no, that outfit looks like its meant for a stripper club and I'm not comfortable of showing my stomach with that!" Christine said.

"Okay, how about this" He shows her the second one that has frills.

"That looks like it has too much frills"

"That is meant for the Tango"

"How many types of dancing are we going to perform"

"Only three"

"What!!"

"Christine, its going to be alright now how about this" He shows her the third dress that has so much detail to it.

"I love this, its so pretty" 

" That will be for our Waltz routine. Here's the last one" He shows her the forth dress that looks simple but it was beautifully decorated.

"This is so pretty even though its simple" Peniel puts the dresses back in the closet.


Peniel and Christine gets their stuff and walks back to the condo building.

"Okay then, didn't you tell me that you have a date with your boyfriend tonight" Peniel said.

"Yeah, because he wants to celebrate my victory on a case yesterday." Christine said.

"Do you mind if we can exchange numbers so that I can let you know if we have practice or not or anything."

"Sure, I guess" Christine and Peniel then exchange numbers. While they're walking back to their condo, Christine bumps into somebody.

"I'm so sorry" Christine apologizes.

"It's okay beautiful" a voice said. Christine and Peniel stopped, turned around and looks at a guy who looks like he is still in high school.

"Chunji" Peniel said with such hatred.

"Hello Peniel, I heard about what happened to your dance partner. How are you going to compete for this year's competition huh?" Chunji said.

"Well, I have a new partner right here" Peniel puts his are around Christine's shoulder.

"Her? She looks like she doesn't have any experience. You're that desperate to win back the champion title you once had."

"Shut up" Christine can sees Peniel's eyes filled with such hatred.

"Well, see you whenever" Chunji comes close to Christine.

Chunji picks her chin up for her to look at him "And you can call me sometime gorgeous" He gives Christine his phone number and walks away.

"Such an !" Peniel shouted as they start walking again.

"Oh, so he is the one who you lost your champion title too." Christine said.

"Don't mention him okay?" Finally they arrrived at their condos. Christine gets into her condo and notices that Hoon is gone.

"I wonder where's Hoon? Oh well" Christine goes to her room and gets ready for her date with Aron.


Here's Chunji's first appearance!

Please let me know which celebrity do you want to appear in this story. Don't be scared to tell me, I'll accept it!

All you have to do is comment below for your request!!:)

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--tiamo #1
Chapter 2: cx the pickup lines are from his vlog omo cx
love_me_love_kpop
#2
You should take out the character profiles. It literally strips the character of any qualities they had. It gave away their love interest and also what will happen in the story. So the reader now already knows the basic plot of the story from the beginning. You don't want that. Instead, you want to do that IN the story, not before it starts. Let the reader figure out the character's personality and ability for themselves.
Think about any book or movie you've read/seen.
Intricate plot, yes? (If it didn't, then that'd be such a boring movie/book)
Interesting characters? Probably.
Did it have any character profiles? No.
Now I know what you'll say, this is not an officially published book and all. But character profiles are definitely 200% not needed. Even if argued that a character has an intricate past, they aren't needed. Take them out. Trust me here. Take Harry Potter for example. J.K Rowling does an amazing job at making her characters who have very intricate pasts and making 3D characters without profiles. The character should be introduced through other things. Such as dialogue and actions. It takes up time to one, write them, and two, for the reader to read them too. They are completely unnecessary and I stress this a lot because there are so many authors who fail to realize this. I could go on and on about how character profiles aren't necessary but I think I've taken up enough of your time.
Sorry if it sounded harsh but when it comes to stories, I tend to be very honest.
dragonmask
#3
I am going to read your story. It sounds good. Oh and I love the picture that you had chose for Hoon. It is lovely.
Ace_of_Butterfly
#4
Chapter 6: God damn it yeah!!! It was awsome!!! And christine and peniel will match together!!!! Oww dae!!! Yahhyyy!!!! Realy enjoy this!!!!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#5
Chapter 5: What the...??? You've read my mind author nim!!!! Is this Kevin UKiss? In the previously chapie I commented about him and right now I'm shocked.....you're one great of a perfect writer, I don't have words anymore......
Ace_of_Butterfly
#6
Chapter 4: This is DAEBAK!!! Ohh my God, this story it's awsome!!!! But author nim, could you make Kevin from U Kiss to participate in this story??? Just cuz you've asked for a celebrity....^~^
Kawaii_Player
#7
LOVING IT!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#8
Chapter 3: Whooaaa Hoon made her to accept!!! Super chapter!!! I'm waiting....
Ace_of_Butterfly
#9
Chapter 2: Awsome!!!!!! Amazing chapter!!! Keep writing author nim!!!!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#10
Chapter 1: New start...it's good!!! Awsome!!!