Moving In

The Dancer Next Door

Today's the day that two best friends, Christine and Hoon move into their new condo in the luxurious Blooming Residence.

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Christine carries boxes of photos while Hoon helps the movers move the mattresses into the condo. Christine and Hoon decided to move to Gangnam so that Christine can get closer to the courthouse and office she works at. Also so that students who want to take voice lessons can take them from Hoon, who has an amazing voice.

"Can you believe it Hoon, today we can have a fresh new start" Christine said as she smells the new house smell.

"That's great Christine but can we have a little help here with the mattress" Hoon said loosing his grip on the bed. Christine puts down the boxes of photos on the coffee table and helps Hoon and the mover with the mattress. After Hoon and Christine move their things into the condo, they sat down on the couch, have a cup of coffee and enjoying the view.

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Christine's office space:

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"Have you told your students that you'd be moving here for lessons?" Christine asked.

"Yeah, I told their parents to not worry and that we can work it out" Hoon said sipping some more of his coffee. Christine got up from the couch, gets her papers, and suitcase. She was about to open the door until Hoon spoke up.

"Where are you going?" Hoon asked.

"I'm going to work" Christine replied.

"But we spent all afternoon moving the stuff into the condo. You don't need to work today"

"Its okay oppa, besides I need to work on a big case"

"Ohh! Is it a murder case!!!" Hoon said jumping up and down from the couch like a little kid.

"No, its more of a lawsuit case between an idol group and the company." Hoon is always into murder cases. He would watch crime movies, dramas and documentaries all night long and that he would be excited everytime when Christine brings up a case she's working on.

"Get off of the couch, its new and it was on sale for limited time!!" Christine shouts.

"Fine!" Hoon sits back down, crosses his arms and pouts.

"Well, I'm off now so see you at 9" Christine waves him goodbye, grabs the keys and leaves the condo. When Christine locks up her condo, she hears a door slammed open from the condo next door.


Wonder who could that be?

Here's the first chapter of this story, I hope you guys enjoyed it!

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I was thinking I should put celebrity appearances into the story..... comment below on who do you want to make an appearance in this story. I'll choose some myself but your opinion matters!!:)

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Just one more chapter of A Walk To Fame:Witness Protection then I will start writing the first chapter for this story!!!:)

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--tiamo #1
Chapter 2: cx the pickup lines are from his vlog omo cx
love_me_love_kpop
#2
You should take out the character profiles. It literally strips the character of any qualities they had. It gave away their love interest and also what will happen in the story. So the reader now already knows the basic plot of the story from the beginning. You don't want that. Instead, you want to do that IN the story, not before it starts. Let the reader figure out the character's personality and ability for themselves.
Think about any book or movie you've read/seen.
Intricate plot, yes? (If it didn't, then that'd be such a boring movie/book)
Interesting characters? Probably.
Did it have any character profiles? No.
Now I know what you'll say, this is not an officially published book and all. But character profiles are definitely 200% not needed. Even if argued that a character has an intricate past, they aren't needed. Take them out. Trust me here. Take Harry Potter for example. J.K Rowling does an amazing job at making her characters who have very intricate pasts and making 3D characters without profiles. The character should be introduced through other things. Such as dialogue and actions. It takes up time to one, write them, and two, for the reader to read them too. They are completely unnecessary and I stress this a lot because there are so many authors who fail to realize this. I could go on and on about how character profiles aren't necessary but I think I've taken up enough of your time.
Sorry if it sounded harsh but when it comes to stories, I tend to be very honest.
dragonmask
#3
I am going to read your story. It sounds good. Oh and I love the picture that you had chose for Hoon. It is lovely.
Ace_of_Butterfly
#4
Chapter 6: God damn it yeah!!! It was awsome!!! And christine and peniel will match together!!!! Oww dae!!! Yahhyyy!!!! Realy enjoy this!!!!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#5
Chapter 5: What the...??? You've read my mind author nim!!!! Is this Kevin UKiss? In the previously chapie I commented about him and right now I'm shocked.....you're one great of a perfect writer, I don't have words anymore......
Ace_of_Butterfly
#6
Chapter 4: This is DAEBAK!!! Ohh my God, this story it's awsome!!!! But author nim, could you make Kevin from U Kiss to participate in this story??? Just cuz you've asked for a celebrity....^~^
Kawaii_Player
#7
LOVING IT!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#8
Chapter 3: Whooaaa Hoon made her to accept!!! Super chapter!!! I'm waiting....
Ace_of_Butterfly
#9
Chapter 2: Awsome!!!!!! Amazing chapter!!! Keep writing author nim!!!!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#10
Chapter 1: New start...it's good!!! Awsome!!!