Epilogue

The Dancer Next Door

Christine's P.O.V

"A year has past already? Wow, time flys by really fast, especially if you had realized what you really wanted to pursue and also finding someone you love within a year. I bet you guys want to know what's going on now in my life.

Well, all I can tell you is that Hoon and Ailee are now engaged. I am so happy for Hoon, I used to all the time of when he is going to propose to Ailee until he finally did it. Bora, Peniel's former dance partner has decided to pursue her dream as a choreographer in a record company. For Aron, we still remained friends and he already found a new lover back in LA.  Chunji, well....let just say that his career as a dancer has gone downhill and nobody was sure what he really does now. As for me, me and Peniel decided to live together at Peniel's condo. I quit my job as a lawyer to pursue my life long dream as a dancer. I talked to my mom about it, she said as long as I'm happy, she's happy. She also said that my dad would be so proud of me right now if he is still alive. See ya lovelies later " I tapped the record button again to stop the camera from rolling. I started a video diary since last year after the competition. I don't upload videos regularly but since it was the day I decided to be dance partners with Peniel, I decided to give the fans a heads up. I saved the video and uploaded the video on my youtube channel. As soon as I was done uploading, Peniel open the backstage door.

"Hey Christine, we're about to perform" Peniel said. Yep, today we are performing as special guest for the show Dancing 9.

"Okay" I walked to him and walked with him hand in hand to the other side of the stage. Before we get on stage to perform, Peniel faced me putting his hand on my cheek. He looks at me lovingly. " Are you ready?" Peniel asked. I leaned in, giving him a kiss on the lips. "I'm always ready" I said confidently and both of us head to the stage, getting into our positions.

Christine and Peniel's Hip Hop Performance

After the performance, everyone in the audience gave our performance a round of applause. I'm so happy to be dancing on stage with the person I loved the most. When I get a little nervous before a performace, he is always there for me. Not only me and Peniel are partners in dancing but we are also partners in love.


Here is the ending you guys. Although this story is a failure:(, I also had fun writing this story because I get to use videos and also I learn a lot. I'm still learning more. You can go to the last chapter about the details about my forth story and you can also look in my blog post. Now I'm going to plan my 4th story and also find a coauthor. I will reveal the title of the story, the cast and also your favorite kpop groups when I'm ready. See you guys soon in my 4th story!:)

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--tiamo #1
Chapter 2: cx the pickup lines are from his vlog omo cx
love_me_love_kpop
#2
You should take out the character profiles. It literally strips the character of any qualities they had. It gave away their love interest and also what will happen in the story. So the reader now already knows the basic plot of the story from the beginning. You don't want that. Instead, you want to do that IN the story, not before it starts. Let the reader figure out the character's personality and ability for themselves.
Think about any book or movie you've read/seen.
Intricate plot, yes? (If it didn't, then that'd be such a boring movie/book)
Interesting characters? Probably.
Did it have any character profiles? No.
Now I know what you'll say, this is not an officially published book and all. But character profiles are definitely 200% not needed. Even if argued that a character has an intricate past, they aren't needed. Take them out. Trust me here. Take Harry Potter for example. J.K Rowling does an amazing job at making her characters who have very intricate pasts and making 3D characters without profiles. The character should be introduced through other things. Such as dialogue and actions. It takes up time to one, write them, and two, for the reader to read them too. They are completely unnecessary and I stress this a lot because there are so many authors who fail to realize this. I could go on and on about how character profiles aren't necessary but I think I've taken up enough of your time.
Sorry if it sounded harsh but when it comes to stories, I tend to be very honest.
dragonmask
#3
I am going to read your story. It sounds good. Oh and I love the picture that you had chose for Hoon. It is lovely.
Ace_of_Butterfly
#4
Chapter 6: God damn it yeah!!! It was awsome!!! And christine and peniel will match together!!!! Oww dae!!! Yahhyyy!!!! Realy enjoy this!!!!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#5
Chapter 5: What the...??? You've read my mind author nim!!!! Is this Kevin UKiss? In the previously chapie I commented about him and right now I'm shocked.....you're one great of a perfect writer, I don't have words anymore......
Ace_of_Butterfly
#6
Chapter 4: This is DAEBAK!!! Ohh my God, this story it's awsome!!!! But author nim, could you make Kevin from U Kiss to participate in this story??? Just cuz you've asked for a celebrity....^~^
Kawaii_Player
#7
LOVING IT!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#8
Chapter 3: Whooaaa Hoon made her to accept!!! Super chapter!!! I'm waiting....
Ace_of_Butterfly
#9
Chapter 2: Awsome!!!!!! Amazing chapter!!! Keep writing author nim!!!!
Ace_of_Butterfly
#10
Chapter 1: New start...it's good!!! Awsome!!!