A Little More Closer

Falling Down

 

We got off of the bus and stopped at his house. 
 
-Do you live here? I asked speechless 
 
-Yes, I know it's not a big thing and will not be very nice but ... 
 
-Isn't the big thing?! It's huge! 
 
He laughed and I was in awe, his house was, at least, bigger than mine and the grass that surrounded the house was well kept and with small drops which showed that was recently watered.
 
-Let's get in, come on
 
We walked into the house and it was really REALLY big I mean outside looks big but inside is like a castle or maybe it was the classy furniture.
 
-Stop doing that
-What? 
-You have been watching all my house since we get here, do you really have a  house that small?
-Sorry, I'm not used to see beautiful houses like this, you must live like a prince in here.
-It's not like that my room is more at my style the rest of the house is my mom's world.
I laughed and said 
-Ugh so your room is that boring? 
-Yah I'm not boring, look at me I'm the most fashionista in the world!
 
I started to laugh and he punch me in the arm.
 
-Ouch- I said, rubbing my shoulder
 
-I'm sorry, did I hurt y...
-You hit like a little girl 
-Little pony you will regret have said that!
 
Running upstairs and laughing loudly I hide inside one room. I turned around to see the room, gray walls, furniture and boxes with cobwebs and dust. A cold air hit my face suddenly causing my eyes to close, walking backwards I bump into Kris when I opened my eyes.
 
-What are you doing here?
-Oh my god you scared me, I was..
-You can't be here get out right now
-B-but Kr-Kris...
-Get out now!
 
That scream made me feel so scared about it. What's the secret about this room? Is that bad to enter here?
 
-I'm sorry.
 
I left the room to go down the stairs slowly trying to know why he get mad that way. 
 
-I think it's better if I leave, thanks for inviting me- I said centimeters from the door, I took my backpack and opened the door.
 
-Wait
 
Standing there frozen, I didn't knew what to do, kris went where I was and suddenly hug me from behind leaving me speechless.
After a few minutes I felt cold drops in my jacket, he was crying in silence on my shoulder.
 
The best experience I felt, now it doesn't seems to be the same...
 
I remember that moment like it was yesterday.
 
 
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HzLicious #1
Chapter 18: i’m sorry,but your story is kinda make me confused.your plot is confusing,and your POV is a big no no.sometimes you said ”he“ and than you changed to “i“ in one pharagraph or worst in one sentence.you had a lot of grammar mistake,misspelling,incoherrent text.and who’s the hell “Rio”?is this a translated story?
bizzyMe #2
Chapter 18: Finally.... After thousand year waiting for ur update. Omg! Does Baek saw Lay at tue restaurant? And now, they will be staying at the same hotel. Update soon, please.
KaihunKray #3
Chapter 17: I still dont get aim of Suho. What the hell wrong with him? Why???He fall in love with Xing? That's the only reason to hide Xing by his side?
fr_unicorn #4
Chapter 17: okay, i'm a lil bit confused here. so suho is not with the rest of the members for almost 2 months and he's taking care of yixing, right? yixing is man/namja/male, right? so maybe i spotted your mistake by addressing yixing as "her" not "him" in the third scene. because it takes me a while for kept thinking that yixing is a girl now until i read how he called suho as "hyung" instead of "oppa" ahahaha lol at me.

anyway, suho, dear, can i smack your head for keeping yixing with you instead of revealing him to krissy that he's not dead? aigooo i ship kray soooo badly.. hahaha
update soon, author-nim^^ thanks for keep updating~
bizzyMe #5
Chapter 17: okey... this is just getting interesting! hope they will meet the short memory lost lay at the Lotte World. can't wait for the updated. fighting! :)
fr_unicorn #6
Chapter 16: krissy, lay is fine.. but he doesn't remember about you.. this is so sad ands heartbreaking T_T i really ship krislay sooo badly so this is breaking my heart T_T gonna be waiting for another chapter then.. update soon, ne? :)
KaihunKray #7
Chapter 16: what the.... O_O
Jeje_KrAyson #8
Chapter 16: oowwhhhh this is rly asdfghjkl..lay is fine kris, but he is don't remmbr abt u >_< wohh i want to tell kris the truth but i can't LOL
KaihunKray #9
Chapter 15: omg.. omg...omg. TT___TT
fr_unicorn #10
Chapter 15: what?! who's kris?! he didn't remember who is kris? uh oh this is bad.. taozi why are you so mean here?? TT___TT update soon, author-nim :)
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