Bite The Dust

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He was a murderer so he would resent him for the rest of his life

 


 

Black.

Everywhere he looked, everything was black.

Junhong shut his eyes and covered them with his palm, suppressing every tear, sadness and grief that had been pleading to escape from him. He didn’t want to show his weak state to anyone. No, he refused to because he didn’t want to be pitied.

The sky was rumbling, preparing itself to cry together with everyone who had gathered around the field, wearing black from head to toe. Junhong could feel a drop of rain caressing his left cheek. He wiped it off his face in an instant—afraid that the others would misunderstand it as his tear.

When the small crowd had dispersed, Junhong stepped in front of the coffin and knelt down on the damp grass. He ran his fingers on the wooden surface of the black box and bit his lips as hard as he could just so he wouldn’t burst into tears.

“Hyung,” he croaked, closing his eyes as he pronounced the word wistfully. “Yongguk hyung, please come back. I need you…”

 

A part of Junhong had died.

Foreword

 

A story of a boy who struggles to reach the happy ending.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You shall not plagiarize this story or you will suffer from the consequences.

Any resemblance to other stories is purely coincidental.

All rights reserved by Dormiveglia

 

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Gazeru
Depressing story is depressing

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Drviewsual
#1
Chapter 20: After finishing reading everything in three hours, my feels just bursted at that ending and I cried.
I can tell that I'll be seeking for more of your works in the future. "Darkish thing and anything psychological" is my thing too so you're kinda perfect.
And "Write drunk, edit sober" is admittedly one useful phrase. I'm no pro to follow your pace - it took me three months to finish a 20 chaptered fic (I wrote continuously within that time) but I'm willing to learn from your experience. It's awe-inspiring.
Though, after editing, I did feel that the chapters were not fulfilling so I kinda joined two chapters together and add stuff here and there. But that's the point of "edit sober".
Thank you for this wonderful story! Please keep writing~
DorkyKpopLover
#2
Chapter 20: OHMYGAS!!!! HIMCHAN! WHY CANT YOU REMEMBER ;-; If im Zelo i'll do my best to work and change my name into junhee AHAHA XDD

Thank you for this Author nim~ ♥ I'll come up witb ideas and tell you about it :D
Bibieonni #3
Chapter 20: A bitter-sweet end, indeed, got me emotional :´)
Thankyou very much for this beautiful story(yes, despite all that happened i really thing its beautiful, in some way...)
You´re a very good author, with all the not so common themes you like to use, and the Himlo of course ;)
The fact that you wrote this story in just a week only make me adimire and respect you more!!
I cant wait to see more of your work!!
eatramyeon
#4
Chapter 20: awwwwh such bittersweet ending that it melts my heart. T.T
and Junhong's so excited to see Himchan it's so cuteeee. and somehow I'm hoping for a sequel of daelo... >.< hihi
this is good considering your one week of writing and you've edited it a lot which I think makes it better than expected. :)
itsayazelo #5
Chapter 20: JUNEE WEEEEEEEEIEEEE ~~
Thank you so much for writing this authornim. It was really an awesome story!!! I'm hoping to see more stories from you~ (cuz i have stalked your stories and read all of them plus your stories are my type- dark, mystery, psychological) *o*

--- ♥♥♥♥
eatramyeon
#6
Chapter 19: what?! so they're just gonna take some time off? that's not good. what if they grow distant and then... wait... but Himchan needs his space. okay. back out for a while Junhong. can't believe it's ending so soon. Just when it's getting sweeter and sweeter. :')
DorkyKpopLover
#7
Chapter 19: Himchan needs time. ^_^
itsayazelo #8
Chapter 19: Awwwwww I hope himchan wouldn't be guilty anymore :(
Bibieonni #9
Chapter 19: I hope the time apart will really do them some Good....
Cant wait for the next update!!
eatramyeon
#10
Chapter 18: oh no. what misfortune had attached itself onto them? can't this world of your writings let them live happily ever after after Himchan woke up?? Gahh such a cruel cruel world for Himlo. hehe. so heartwrenching, I cannot. let them suffer no more. LOL penultimate chapterrrr? wow time goes by so fast...