Title (4/5) I personally liked the title, it gave off a elegant but dark feel. But the title should've been, "Cinderella's Mask" instead.     Appearance (3/5) I like the mask stock photo you (Or the designer) used. But I look at 'Once upon a time' more then 'Cinderella Mask' since the font is really small. It'll be better if 'Cinderella Mask' is emphasized more.     Foreword & Description (10/15) It's actually just a sentence 'If I'm Cinderella,will you be my Prince Charming?' so I can't really say anything. And that quote really doesn't feel special (?) and attracts attention.       Characters (9/15) You didn't really describe the characters since you put pictures instead. But you would have did better if you were more clear on the character's feelings. Like 'Falling on her knees,Taemin broke into tears.' You could have wrote, 'Falling on her knees, Taemin broke into tears- she was scared and she didn't knew what to do but letting the tears fall out.'       Plot (13/20) Your story is really familiar with 'A Cinderella's Story' and lots of other stories have the same type of plots too. But I saw you added some twists in it so it made it more 'original' but I could usually guess what was going to happen next. The twists you add should have more effect, like writting a twist with a bigger impact. It'll be better.     Flow (7/10) For me, it seemed a little unstable. It was slow and dragged at first then it suddenly went fast. But as more chapters go by, the pace steadied mor