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My sweetest downfall
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" ask me a question " Moonbyul said as she appeared in front of me. I just finished my art class.

" question? " I frowned at her.

" don't you remember? We had a deal, that you'll ask me something per day in exchange of you going with me wherever I want to go? " she frowned at me as if I just forgot a very important thing on my life.

" you should remember things " she smiled at slightly hit my head. She raised an eyebrow on me like she's really waiting for my question, I sighed and just thought about some random things that I want to know about her.

" why are you being so kind to me? " I asked her. She scratches her chin, it seems like she's really thinking about it.

" because... I just want to " I was dumbfounded at her answer, she just smiled at me after she said that and immediately held my hand and pulled me to her car.

" ya! That's an unfair answer! " I shouted as she pulls me towards her car.

" why? I answered it " she laughed at me and opened the car door.

She's humming to the song of MAMAMOO while driving down the road; she seems to be on a happy mood. I sighed and rested my head on the window. I have a lot of things that is on my mind right now.

Before I got out of the room earlier Ms. Yuria handed me a pamphlet of an art school, she said that it will be good for me to attend that school and it will really help me. I remembered that school recruiting me before I left the field of arts and now I'm contemplating about entering that school now.

" what's on your mind? " my thoughts got blown away when Moonbyul suddenly leaned forward into me. I just realized that the car isn't moving anymore.

" something " I softly said. She's too close to my face. I can see every eyelash that she has and those eyes that I always got drown into.

" don't think of anything when you're with me, I hate it " she seriously said.

I can smell her minty breath and her perfume from here, being with her for almost every day made me familiarize her scent; I think even I close my eyes I can distinguish her scent.

" ca-can you move away? " I stuttered a bit.

" oh, I'm sorry! " she chuckled like she didn't just made anything weird to me. She unbuckled my seatbelt and got out of the car; I sighed once again and momentarily closed my eyes-- I can't just get used to her actions.

When I got out of the car I realized that we're on an orphanage. Moonbyul excitedly entered the place and as soon as the children saw her they ran towards her and gave her a hug.

" unnie! " the kids are really doing their best for Moonbyul to notice them, they are jumping back and forth and shouting Moonbyul's name. She's like a celebrity in here, jeez.

" are you with Moonbyul? " my heart almost fell when I heard someone behind me.

" ah, yes " I answered to a nun; maybe she's the one who's facilitating everything in here.

" it's really rare for her to

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mypurpleapplepen
#1
Chapter 28: Thank you authornim. Im sad now
mypurpleapplepen
#2
Chapter 2: Interesting start. Based from the comments, should i prepare tissue🤧🤧
Laayy_15 #3
Chapter 28: Once again I'm crying bcs of this story, nice work author-nim
Daebak_Janggu #4
Chapter 28: I knew she was going to die, I knew what I was getting myself into. At first I thought this was going to be like the story of the movie "Last Christmas" in which the woman's life was pretty broken, but then she meets this man and he changes her life making her to fall in love with him in the process, but that latter we actually discover that he's dead and that she was just interacting with a ghost. As I continued to read further, I realised that I couldn't be more wrong and despite me still being so fricking counscious that moon was going to die, it couldn't stoped me from feeling the PAIN. They suffered enough in the past, yet, their future holded bigger trageties disguised in happinnes and love. Such a heartbreaking story. In stories like this I like to pretend that when they reborn, they'll become the moon and the sun that they are now, and that's pretty comforting. At least to me. Anyways, thank you for sharing this story with us authornim.
amorzetya #5
Chapter 28: The greatest story of moonsun that I ever read
m_s4x4 #6
Chapter 28: 3 years on, people are still reading this. Good read!
Moon_22
#7
Chapter 28: beautiful disaster </3
Moobyulsolarlove
#8
One of my fav MoonSun fanfics
Love it
Plz write another MoonSun story
Emily_fv
#9
Chapter 28: it keeps making me cry every time
Scarlet14 #10
Chapter 28: Finished reading it in like two hours......that sure was an emotional rollercoaster for me ^-^ Although the story line and plot was obvious for me right from the start, i still like it and made me cry on the last two chapters. Maybe that's your charm author-nim. You've got raw talent, your stories aren't messy or confusing and i hope you write more in the future. Fighting!!!!