12:

My sweetest downfall
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" are you really practicing? Your work isn't improving even a little bit " I can hear Ms. Yuria said to another student.

Her words are sharp and can really break some ego, but that words can really mold you into something you want to be, well base on experience. It may hurt, but as you remember her words and tell yourself that you should prove her wrong, there your skills will go out.

" I don't like to see that kind of work ever again " Ms Yuria left her and walked towards me. My reflexes suddenly and I sat properly on my stool; her aura as a teacher really send chills into my spine.

" your painting should be happy and lively, am I right? But I can't see any of that. It looks dull and sad " she said.

" you've been painting the same scene over and over again " she added.

I've been painting a snowy scenery. That place has been going on my mind for a while now. I've been dreaming about myself being in there, but I can't really remember anything once I wake up; all I can remember is the place and how white it is because of the snow that's falling from the sky.

" Solar have you thought about entering that school? " Ms. Yuria said as she checks my finished work. She has her hand on her chin while staring at my work carefully; I used to be nervous whenever she looks at my works back then because I want her to compliment me and not criticize my work. Well I'm still nervous, but different from before.

" I haven't " I shortly responded. She looked at me and slightly arranged her glasses, she sighed and held my shoulders.

" you know that the school won't accept any students anymore at the end of this month, right? Think about it more carefully and when you do, tell me your decision. I can help you get into that school if you just say yes " she said and gently tapped my shoulder.

I've been thinking of going to that school. It's far and I can really learn a lot of techniques and skills in there so I am really considering it, but it feels like my heart wants to stay here. I don't know if it's because of Eric or because of somebody else.

" boooo! " I was startled when Moonbyul suddenly popped from the back of my canvas.

" you look so serious " she said as she opens her ice-cream.

My lesson for today is over, but I decided to stay here for a little bit to finish some of my work's details and I want to think about things; this place is really peaceful and my mind seems to be calm whenever I'm here.

" I'm just thinking about things " I said and go

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mypurpleapplepen
#1
Chapter 28: Thank you authornim. Im sad now
mypurpleapplepen
#2
Chapter 2: Interesting start. Based from the comments, should i prepare tissue🤧🤧
Laayy_15 #3
Chapter 28: Once again I'm crying bcs of this story, nice work author-nim
Daebak_Janggu #4
Chapter 28: I knew she was going to die, I knew what I was getting myself into. At first I thought this was going to be like the story of the movie "Last Christmas" in which the woman's life was pretty broken, but then she meets this man and he changes her life making her to fall in love with him in the process, but that latter we actually discover that he's dead and that she was just interacting with a ghost. As I continued to read further, I realised that I couldn't be more wrong and despite me still being so fricking counscious that moon was going to die, it couldn't stoped me from feeling the PAIN. They suffered enough in the past, yet, their future holded bigger trageties disguised in happinnes and love. Such a heartbreaking story. In stories like this I like to pretend that when they reborn, they'll become the moon and the sun that they are now, and that's pretty comforting. At least to me. Anyways, thank you for sharing this story with us authornim.
amorzetya #5
Chapter 28: The greatest story of moonsun that I ever read
m_s4x4 #6
Chapter 28: 3 years on, people are still reading this. Good read!
Moon_22
#7
Chapter 28: beautiful disaster </3
Moobyulsolarlove
#8
One of my fav MoonSun fanfics
Love it
Plz write another MoonSun story
Emily_fv
#9
Chapter 28: it keeps making me cry every time
Scarlet14 #10
Chapter 28: Finished reading it in like two hours......that sure was an emotional rollercoaster for me ^-^ Although the story line and plot was obvious for me right from the start, i still like it and made me cry on the last two chapters. Maybe that's your charm author-nim. You've got raw talent, your stories aren't messy or confusing and i hope you write more in the future. Fighting!!!!