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My sweetest downfall
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It's has been 3 days since that girl next door dropped that question 'would you ever go back on painting?' that question has been bugging me; before I sleep or even as soon as I wake up. It's been ringing on my head every time-- am I really considering painting again?

" dad " I stood up when I saw my parents go down the staircase. I may say that my family is kind of well off, I mean they have a lot of business that can generate a lot of money.

" oh dear " my mom said and rushed towards me to give me a hug. They have probably heard about what happened with me and Eric so they called me in today.

" dad " I walked to my father wanting to give him a hug, but a loud echo of slap filled the house. I looked at him after he slapped me, but there's no hint of guilt on his eyes, it's just full of anger and disappointment.

" honey " my mom immediately pulled me behind her back to shield me from my father.

My father is really loving and caring towards me, but when I started to break his rules and not follow what he wants me to do he started to become distant with me and the death of that loving father is when I decided to go with Eric-- I lost my father in exchange of having life with Eric.

 " what did I tell you? " dad asked me with his stern voice. I'm getting scared, my knees are like giving up on me; I’m shaking.

" WHAT DID I TOLD YOU ABOUT THAT BASTARD! " he shouted. His voice is echoing inside the house, aside from us there's no one in this house except from the maids and luxurious things. I'm an only child.

" look at you now! Before you got out of this house you have everything, but now, look at yourself! You gave out your everything for that man who can't value you! " my dad words pierced through my heart, it burnt my heart because I know he's telling me the truth.

" honey stop, our daughter just came home " my mom said as she caresses my back.

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mypurpleapplepen
#1
Chapter 28: Thank you authornim. Im sad now
mypurpleapplepen
#2
Chapter 2: Interesting start. Based from the comments, should i prepare tissue🤧🤧
Laayy_15 #3
Chapter 28: Once again I'm crying bcs of this story, nice work author-nim
Daebak_Janggu #4
Chapter 28: I knew she was going to die, I knew what I was getting myself into. At first I thought this was going to be like the story of the movie "Last Christmas" in which the woman's life was pretty broken, but then she meets this man and he changes her life making her to fall in love with him in the process, but that latter we actually discover that he's dead and that she was just interacting with a ghost. As I continued to read further, I realised that I couldn't be more wrong and despite me still being so fricking counscious that moon was going to die, it couldn't stoped me from feeling the PAIN. They suffered enough in the past, yet, their future holded bigger trageties disguised in happinnes and love. Such a heartbreaking story. In stories like this I like to pretend that when they reborn, they'll become the moon and the sun that they are now, and that's pretty comforting. At least to me. Anyways, thank you for sharing this story with us authornim.
amorzetya #5
Chapter 28: The greatest story of moonsun that I ever read
m_s4x4 #6
Chapter 28: 3 years on, people are still reading this. Good read!
Moon_22
#7
Chapter 28: beautiful disaster </3
Moobyulsolarlove
#8
One of my fav MoonSun fanfics
Love it
Plz write another MoonSun story
Emily_fv
#9
Chapter 28: it keeps making me cry every time
Scarlet14 #10
Chapter 28: Finished reading it in like two hours......that sure was an emotional rollercoaster for me ^-^ Although the story line and plot was obvious for me right from the start, i still like it and made me cry on the last two chapters. Maybe that's your charm author-nim. You've got raw talent, your stories aren't messy or confusing and i hope you write more in the future. Fighting!!!!