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My sweetest downfall
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" can we not do this? " it's the ninth time that I asked Hwasa that. We're on our favorite salon back when we're college and up to now. We are here for about 7 hours now, they are grooming me from head to toe; it's tiring and mentally draining. It's been a long time since I sat this long on a salon's chair.

" you can't be looking like a beggar, girl. You should look more gorgeous than the bride to be " Wheein said as she read some sort of magazine. They are pampering their selves too. If warriors prepare by training their selves, we are preparing by beautifying ourselves.

" where's Moonbyul? " I asked them. She started this petty plan and now she's nowhere to be found and it feels like they got closer to each other more than me.

" moon appears at night " Hwasa shrugged.

" Yongsun-ah " Hwasa seriously approached me. I looked at her and raised an eyebrow.

" about Moonbyul... aish, never mind " she said and harshly grabbed the magazine in front of her.

After all the grooming, they have done to me, someone pulled me on a room and began to dress me up. I feel like I'm a doll and these people are my owners, it's tiring by just removing and dressing these dresses. I can't wait to have this day over.

" omo " Wheein exclaimed when she saw me. She's wearing a dashing black long dress paired with a clutch that has diamonds on it, she looks luxurious.

" why am I seeing Yongsun younger version? " Hwasa said, she's wearing a backless long dress and a six-inch-high heels. That's so her, bold and wild.

" you guys are over reacting " I said as my face reddened. They are complimenting me too much. I'm wearing a white long dress; my hair is curled and my look is paired by a silver louis Vuitton clutch.

" we're not, you really do look dashing " our heads turned when someone talked. We saw Moonbyul and I just can't believe what my eyes are seeing right now, is this really the bummer I used to see? I can really say now that she came from an elite family.

Moonbyul is magnificently walking towards us with her high heels, she's walking like she's just wearing some flat shoes; she's wearing a silver long gown with a slit on the sides revealing her milky legs and her hair tied up showing her neckline and collarbone.

Can someone please pinch me? Because I think she's so hot.

" you really look good. I'm now contemplating if I want you to step on that useless party or should I bring you to more appropriate place that will deserve your beauty " she said and removed some

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mypurpleapplepen
#1
Chapter 28: Thank you authornim. Im sad now
mypurpleapplepen
#2
Chapter 2: Interesting start. Based from the comments, should i prepare tissue🤧🤧
Laayy_15 #3
Chapter 28: Once again I'm crying bcs of this story, nice work author-nim
Daebak_Janggu #4
Chapter 28: I knew she was going to die, I knew what I was getting myself into. At first I thought this was going to be like the story of the movie "Last Christmas" in which the woman's life was pretty broken, but then she meets this man and he changes her life making her to fall in love with him in the process, but that latter we actually discover that he's dead and that she was just interacting with a ghost. As I continued to read further, I realised that I couldn't be more wrong and despite me still being so fricking counscious that moon was going to die, it couldn't stoped me from feeling the PAIN. They suffered enough in the past, yet, their future holded bigger trageties disguised in happinnes and love. Such a heartbreaking story. In stories like this I like to pretend that when they reborn, they'll become the moon and the sun that they are now, and that's pretty comforting. At least to me. Anyways, thank you for sharing this story with us authornim.
amorzetya #5
Chapter 28: The greatest story of moonsun that I ever read
m_s4x4 #6
Chapter 28: 3 years on, people are still reading this. Good read!
Moon_22
#7
Chapter 28: beautiful disaster </3
Moobyulsolarlove
#8
One of my fav MoonSun fanfics
Love it
Plz write another MoonSun story
Emily_fv
#9
Chapter 28: it keeps making me cry every time
Scarlet14 #10
Chapter 28: Finished reading it in like two hours......that sure was an emotional rollercoaster for me ^-^ Although the story line and plot was obvious for me right from the start, i still like it and made me cry on the last two chapters. Maybe that's your charm author-nim. You've got raw talent, your stories aren't messy or confusing and i hope you write more in the future. Fighting!!!!