14:

My sweetest downfall
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" there's no stars today " I said as I look upon the sky. The sky is dark and clear, leaving the moon alone lighting so bright on that darkness.

" it will probably rain tomorrow " she said while scribbling something on the sand.

I don't know where are we right now, she just drove for hours and will just stop whenever we feel the hunger and we end being in here. All I know is we're on a sea side, looking at the calm sea while sitting on the white sand. I usually gets bored sitting around, but with Moonbyul beside me, I feel satisfied and happy.

" how'd you know? " I asked her. We share the most random conversation for today, we talked about frogs and how they lay their eggs, why cats are snobbish, why alien is not being seen in this planet and many more. It may seem weird, but it brought laughter into us and we're very happy.

" mother Lily once said that whenever the moon is alone and the stars can't be seen it will probably rain tomorrow, it's the way of the sun to show sympathy for the moon for being alone " she said.

" the sun is accompanying the moon while it rains "

" probably " she shrugged at me.

" I haven't used my question for today, right? " I looked at her and our gazes met. I’m totally drowned on that eyes, I have no intention on saving myself; being drowned on her gaze is something that I like.

" what do you want to ask? " she softly smiled at me.

" I want to know who are you and this time I want a serious answer " I am happy to be with her and if I want to stay by her side I feel like I should know her. I don't like mystery between us, I want to know her like the way she knows me.

" I'll be away for about a week or so and by the time I get back let's meet and ask me that question again. I'll answer it and I'll give you your answers clearly " she smiled at me. She reached for my hand, I felt that familiar warmth that she always gives me and it made my heart flutter. It’s only Moonbyul Yi can make my heart flutter this way.

" and by the time I answered your questions don't be confused and just believe me " I don't know what she meant by that, but I just nodded my head and made my heart trust her words. I'll wait for her and by the time she comes back I will happily welcome her in my arms.

For weeks, I really haven't seen her. I've been counting the days till she pops in front of me once again, it has been 15 days and there's still no Moonbyul.

" Solar " Ms. Yuria approached me when I'm about to leave the room.

" the last day of registration for that school is around the corner, are you really sure you don't want to go? " she asked me. I already gave her m

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mypurpleapplepen
#1
Chapter 28: Thank you authornim. Im sad now
mypurpleapplepen
#2
Chapter 2: Interesting start. Based from the comments, should i prepare tissue🤧🤧
Laayy_15 #3
Chapter 28: Once again I'm crying bcs of this story, nice work author-nim
Daebak_Janggu #4
Chapter 28: I knew she was going to die, I knew what I was getting myself into. At first I thought this was going to be like the story of the movie "Last Christmas" in which the woman's life was pretty broken, but then she meets this man and he changes her life making her to fall in love with him in the process, but that latter we actually discover that he's dead and that she was just interacting with a ghost. As I continued to read further, I realised that I couldn't be more wrong and despite me still being so fricking counscious that moon was going to die, it couldn't stoped me from feeling the PAIN. They suffered enough in the past, yet, their future holded bigger trageties disguised in happinnes and love. Such a heartbreaking story. In stories like this I like to pretend that when they reborn, they'll become the moon and the sun that they are now, and that's pretty comforting. At least to me. Anyways, thank you for sharing this story with us authornim.
amorzetya #5
Chapter 28: The greatest story of moonsun that I ever read
m_s4x4 #6
Chapter 28: 3 years on, people are still reading this. Good read!
Moon_22
#7
Chapter 28: beautiful disaster </3
Moobyulsolarlove
#8
One of my fav MoonSun fanfics
Love it
Plz write another MoonSun story
Emily_fv
#9
Chapter 28: it keeps making me cry every time
Scarlet14 #10
Chapter 28: Finished reading it in like two hours......that sure was an emotional rollercoaster for me ^-^ Although the story line and plot was obvious for me right from the start, i still like it and made me cry on the last two chapters. Maybe that's your charm author-nim. You've got raw talent, your stories aren't messy or confusing and i hope you write more in the future. Fighting!!!!