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My sweetest downfall
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" YONGSUN-AH! ARE YOU REALLY NOT GOING TO OPEN THIS DOOR!? I SWEAR I'LL CRASH THIS! " I can hear Hwasa shouting from the outside. Jeez, when did she got home?

It's been 3 days since I confide myself inside this condo. My phone is ringing from time to time and receiving messages from them.

Tomorrow will be Eric's engagement party and I think I'm dying every time that will cross my mind.

I can't think of any reason on why did he do that to me. Where did I lack? Am I not beautiful enough? Am I a failure? Did he get tired of me? Why did our relationship end like this?

" SOLAR OPEN THE DOOR! " this time it's Wheein who's shouting. If Wheein is probably not there, Hwasa would have kicked my door.

" PABO-YA! OPEN THIS DOOR, I'M TELLING YOU! " Hwasa shouted again, but I remain from sitting on my couch and staring blankly at the floor. I have no energy to stand up and I don't want to talk to anyone right now, I just want to be alone; why can't they get that?

It's not like I'm going to kill myself, so they don't have to worry, but if ever I can click the off switch I, probably would do it.

I looked at my phone that has started to ring again; it's not Wheein nor Hwasa, it's Moonbyul. I felt sorry for her, I poured my anger and frustration at her that time. I cried at her, hit her and shouted at her, but all she did is comfort me.

I don't know what has gotten into me, but I picked my phone up and answered her call. Why do I want to hear her voice right now?

" Yongsun " when she called my name, my eyes started to tear up. I wanted to be comforted, but I don't want to be pitied by people. Why do I find comfort with her voice? Why do I find comfort in her?

" I know you're not ok, so I'm not going to ask that, but can I ask you a favor? Can you open your door? Can you open it up for me? " she asked. I don't get it; why is she asking me that even she has spare key to this condominium? This is her condo after all.

" I'll be waiting outside till you open it. Take your time, I can wait " she said before dropping the call.

I have no intention on

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mypurpleapplepen #1
Chapter 28: Thank you authornim. Im sad now
mypurpleapplepen #2
Chapter 2: Interesting start. Based from the comments, should i prepare tissue🤧🤧
Laayy_15 #3
Chapter 28: Once again I'm crying bcs of this story, nice work author-nim
Daebak_Janggu #4
Chapter 28: I knew she was going to die, I knew what I was getting myself into. At first I thought this was going to be like the story of the movie "Last Christmas" in which the woman's life was pretty broken, but then she meets this man and he changes her life making her to fall in love with him in the process, but that latter we actually discover that he's dead and that she was just interacting with a ghost. As I continued to read further, I realised that I couldn't be more wrong and despite me still being so fricking counscious that moon was going to die, it couldn't stoped me from feeling the PAIN. They suffered enough in the past, yet, their future holded bigger trageties disguised in happinnes and love. Such a heartbreaking story. In stories like this I like to pretend that when they reborn, they'll become the moon and the sun that they are now, and that's pretty comforting. At least to me. Anyways, thank you for sharing this story with us authornim.
amorzetya #5
Chapter 28: The greatest story of moonsun that I ever read
m_s4x4 #6
Chapter 28: 3 years on, people are still reading this. Good read!
Moon_22 #7
Chapter 28: beautiful disaster </3
Moobyulsolarlove #8
One of my fav MoonSun fanfics
Love it
Plz write another MoonSun story
Emily_fv #9
Chapter 28: it keeps making me cry every time
Scarlet14 #10
Chapter 28: Finished reading it in like two hours......that sure was an emotional rollercoaster for me ^-^ Although the story line and plot was obvious for me right from the start, i still like it and made me cry on the last two chapters. Maybe that's your charm author-nim. You've got raw talent, your stories aren't messy or confusing and i hope you write more in the future. Fighting!!!!
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