Chapter 16

For The Better Or Worse?
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[CONTENTID1]Chapter 16[/CONTENTID1]

 

[CONTENTID2]Author's pov:


Everything hurt in Luhan's body. His head was pounding and he couldn't remember what had happened to him. His hands were tied together behind a chair that he was sitting at along with his feet. He could feel the rope hurting his skin. It was too tight. The worse part for him was that he couldn't see anything. It was all black. A blindfold was covering his eyes. He grit his teeth, feeling so weak and angry. 

A creaking sound from a few feet away made his head turn that way. A clatter of feet were heard slowly coming his way. He tensed up right away knowing who it was. His monster of a brother. Even if he couldn't see him, he could mentally see the smirk that was placed on his face. He had the temptation to roll his eyes even if he couldn't see him but didn't. He stayed perfectly still, only moving his head to the side a little bit. 

Everything was silent. The only thing that made Kyuhyun see Luhan in the room was the only light that was above his head. His back was straight and he leaned down to be eye level to Luhan. He smirked and lifted his hand, caressing Luhan's cheek. Luhan flinched at first and tried to move but every time he did it, his brother would caress harder. Well, if you can even call it that. He stopped and Kyuhyun glared at him. Tilting his head he did a disapproving look. "Oh, my dear brother. You haven't changed. Still the same old monster you are. I thought you would of had changed by now. Your little mistake caused something to be torn away from me." Kyuhyun send getting his knife out. 

Luhan widen his eyes in realization. So this is why he was doing it. But it wasn't his fault. He was the victim, not the one who caused harm. "Now, you have to suffer." A knife was slowly pressed against his skin and a painful scream was let out. His insides were burning and yet he felt numb. One time hurt and the next time that he was cut by the knife he turn his hand into fists and threw his head backwards. Blood was slowly coming out, making him numb. Help me. But his cries for help weren't heard. His mouth was taped up and his creams turned into muffled sounds. It was torture all the way from his shoulder to arm. "Does that hurt? Oh, poor baby. Well.. Hold on because we are barely getting started. You would feel way worse in a couple of minutes soon." His voice was full with venom and he slowly walked away from the weak boy. He turned around and grabbed the handle of the door but not before saying some last words. "Don't think that anyone is going to save you. You put everyone in danger, especially Chen." His voice was ringing in Luhan's head. Soon Kyunhyun opened the door and turned back to face Luhan and then locking the door with a lock. 

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"Hurry the up! Don't you see that this is an emergency!!!" Xiumin was yelling at Sehun from the passenger's side. Sehun was so nervous even he felt like he was going to crash the car. Xiumin's yelling didn't help, it only made it worse. "I-I'm trying!" Sehun was afraid to say anything that even made him think that Xiumin was going to hit him. "WELL TRY HARDER!" Xiumin was on the verge of wanting to drive the car and throw Sehun to the back seat of the car. Sehun didn't get how much Xiumin was worried because he had no idea exactly what was going on.

Sehun was driving past every car. It was not surprising that a few cars started to honk at him when he was skipping from lane to lane. It was dangerous but he would prefer this than to be killed by Xiumin. A slow and plainly death is not what he wanted. He turned to look at Xiumin but there was no trace of him. Instead next to him there was a person that he didn't look that looked like Xiumin but was not acting like him. Xiumin's character changed so much that Sehun couldn't tell that he was the same sweet kid that he knew back then.

"WATCH OUT!!!!!" Xiumin yelled when Sehun was about to hit a car in front of them. Sehun stepped on the breaks and the car went in a holt. Tired marks

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FlowerBaozi
#1
Chapter 23: I was reading the whole story and I did not realize that i have read this already before yet i forgot to comment and upvote. Like, WTF! Forgive this old man for being too forgetful, but I just wanted to let you know that your story is really amazing. I just feel bad for Chen here and as well as Sehun, but I know the ending on the 2nd book so I'm still happy. You did great.
TheDiamondMaiden
#2
Honestly,I found you on Floras graphic poster's shop and then I was like.....holy shiett. This is good!!
baekchen96 #3
Chapter 22: Omg i just cant help myself but cried when chen heartbroken TT it must be tough for him
ashkhen #4
Chapter 22: Chapter 22: OMG THEY DIDN'T JUST SAY THAT TO XIUMIN. SEHUN WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS. ONCE XIUMIN FINDS OUT, YOU WON'T BE FORGIVEN. ESPECIALLY THOSE DOCTORS AS WELL. XIUMIN IS NOT GOING TO LIKE IT ALL. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUAL TO HAPPEN. THAT WAS A GREAT ENDING.
ashkhen #5
Chapter 21: Chapter 21: OMG THE AMUSEMENT PARK WITH XIUMIN AND LUHAN WAS TOOO CUTE. LUHAN NEW SOMETHING FELT ODD BECAUSE XIUMIN WAS TAKING AWHILE IN THE BATHROOM AND FOUND BLOOD ON XIUMIN'S SWEATSHIRT.

OMG WHO WOULD EXPECT DABIN TO BE BEHIND THE KIDNAPPING. SHE LITERALLY NEEDS TO LEAVE THEM ALONE.

XIUMIN AND LUHAN CAN'T DIE AT ALL. I THINK LUHAN GETS SAVED FROM THE WATER SINCE THE SIREN'S WERE RELEASED. HOPEFULLY DABIN GETS ARRESTED. LUHAN IS GOING TO BE ALIVE AND XIUMIN IS PROBABLY THE ONE TO SAVE LUHAN FROM THE WATER. THE COPS WILL ARREST THE GUYS OR THE GUYS WILL RUN AWAY.
ashkhen #6
Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Poor Sehun and Chen to witness that and find out what went on with Luhan and Chen.

Xiumin and Luhan are soooo in love. I hope Dabin doesn't ruin their happiness.

AWWWW D.O. AND KAI ARE TOGETHER AND D.O. KNOWS PART ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED WITH KAI. THEY ARE FINALLY TOGETHER FOR REAL NOW.
ashkhen #7
Chapter 19: CHAPTER 19: OMG ALOT OF FEELS IN THIS CHAPTER AND THAT WAS REALLY IMPRESSIVE HOW YOU WROTE THIS CHAPTER. XIUMIN AND LUHAN WENT ALL THE WAY AND THAT WAS HOT. THEY HAD THEIR SPECIAL MOMENT.

OMG SEHUN AND CHEN MAKES EVERYTHING HILARIOUS. ESPECIALLY WHEN SEHUN FOUND OUT IT WAS CHEN ON THE BED LOL

HOPEFULLY NOBODY GETS INJURED OR TAKEN AWAY BECAUSE OF WHAT THE GUY SAID TO SEHUN EARLIER.
ashkhen #8
Chapter 18: Chapter 18: AWWWW THIS CHAPTER WAS REALLY EMOTIONAL AND LOVELY FOR BOTH OF THEM. LUHAN AND XIUMIN TOLD EACH OTHER HOW THEY FELT ABOUT ONE ANOTHER. XIUMIN FINALLY TELLS LUHAN WHAT HE KNOWS AND HOW MUCH HE WAITED FOR IT TO HAPPEN. LUHAN AND XIUMIN ARE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER AND ARE TOGETHER NOW.
blue_ALV
#9
Chapter 17: how come in this chapter Sehun
ends up liking luhan when before it he liked Xiumin and wanted to time up with kai to separate xiumin from d.o (fake relationship) ?
ashkhen #10
Chapter 17: Chapter 17: OMG THEY LUCKILY GOT AWAY SAFELY. I FEEL LIKE CHEN'S DAD WAS THE PRESENCE XIUMIN AND LUHAN WERE FEELING. OMG LUHAN AND XIUMIN FINALLY DID A LITTLE BIT OF IT AND HOW SAD FOR CHEN TO WITNESS THAT ALONG WITH SEHUN. I TOTALLY DIDN'T EXPECT SEHUN TO HAVE A LIKING TOWARDS LUHAN.