Chapter 13: - cries silently a river and doesn't know what to do with her life after reading this - First of all, I have to tell you, you don't made a lot grammar and spelling mistakes. Your English is perfectly, but sometimes you forgot about the "Oxford Comma" - screw it. Nobody's perfect and I also make a lot of mistakes with my fanficitons. I have to admit, I was wrapped in with your story. It is a nice story line and I'm actually imagine, having an idol as your boyfriend, but that would be quite exhausting. Despite him being famous, they suited each other so perfectly. So sweetly. I really enjoyed reading your story.
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