Title: 2/5
Honestly, I thought that the ttle didnt really associate wit the story as much. There weren't any runes. Also, the title is pretty common here. But the title is also good however since the words mixed together intrigues people. 

Foreword/Description: 8/10
The description has a lo of fancy words that some people might not understand. The description itself was wonderful. I loved how it gave information but not too much information. I didn't really get the part about witch hunts since the story mentioned nothing about witch hunting unless the parents were witches. The foreword is very lengthy so maybe you could shorten it a bit and make it sweet and simple. It's really good you warned people that there would be vulgar language involved.

Characterization: 15/20
I found all the character's very realistic and each of them had flaws of their own. They were introduced in a right way and their characteristics were consistent throughout the story. I usually like OC's with human characteristics but Eunkyung was very much like a molded character, too perfect in my opinion. In the beginning, you introduced Mark has a happy-go-lucky guy but then later on, he became more firm and that was a huge change.

Plot: 17/20
Like most stories these days, there is a rebellions and all that jazz. It's very common and not very original. I found it quite common to one of the stories I've read here in AFF where they are put in cells with friends and there is this girl who can help them escape and all that stuff. However the way you write it down and describe it makes it as if you were right there, watching all the events play out. 

Mechanics: 5/5
The punctuation was spot on and perfect. All the spelling was wonderful. The sentences were the perfect length and so there's not much to say about it. It's all praises.

Reader's responses: 4/5
Readers really liked how you used the cliff-hanger technique. It had them at the edges of their seats. Props for you on that! All readers, myself included, were very very sad to see Jongin and Eunkyung's fight. It was despairing. They are waiting for your updates(:

Enjoyment: 9/10
I really love stories like these wth the rebellions and everything. The way it's played out and written is wonderful and I don't have much to say here. It was a really great story to read.

Total: 60/75 (85/100)

Comments: I hope this is detailed enough for you. I'm truly sorry if it isn't. Please update the story soon!