Title [4.5/5]

Already from the title, the story seems pretty interesting. I have personally never heard of this legend before, but again, I like trying new things. I loved it– but there was one slight problem. The title was capitalized wrong. It should be "Three Wishes for a Soul" instead of "Three Wishes For A Soul." You can check if your title is correct here.

Description/Foreword [10/10]

It described the legend, making the story a lot easier to understand. Without the summarization of the legend, the whole story would be very confusing because very little people know of this legend– I, for one, didn't know of this so-called legend until I read this story. Your description and foreword was wonderful, so kudos to you!

Characterization [20/20]

I give you full points because you characterized every character perfectly: even the minor characters had a personality. Again, I give you congratulations. Very few authors can actually characterize every single character perfectly.

Plot/Originality [20/20]

Though I've read many KaiSoo fanfics, this is by far the best– and the most original. The plot is great as well, it flows perfectly, and it captivates the reader. I can't even express it enough with words. This is literally the bomb.

Mechanics (Grammar, Spelling & Punctuation) [4/5]

I spotted a few wording mistakes, but it wasn't very important. Also, I noticed an excessive use of ellipses, which could turn the reader off. Try to omit them, or replace them with commas or semicolons.

If ever a certain human gets on an accident, he or she will be saved by an angel and then they'd be left with just two more chances. – If a certain human ever gets in an accident, he or she will be saved by an angel. Then, they'd be left with just two more chances at life. (wording and run-on sentence)

Reader's Response [5/5]

I cried a little bit, I admit that. This is actually the second fanfic to ever get tears out of me. Most of the comments said that the oneshot was really sad or that they had cried when reading it.

Overall Enjoyment [10/10]

I enjoyed it a lot. I am waiting to hear more from you, aha. This was a great story. All of the factors were perfect. Please write more amazing fanfiction like this from now on!

Bonus (5/5) : The graphics were breathtakingly beautiful, and the layout you wrote with was also neat and organized.

Total : 78.5/75 

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