Title [2/5]

Overall the title isn't bad, but, it doesn't catch your eye as much as a story should and doesn't really have any relevance to the first part of the story and wasn't explained how it would fit in in the foreword.

Description/Foreword [7/10]

The foreword was lacking for me, because all it said was that Chanyeol hated kris, one sentence, nothing more and nothing less therefore if I didn't have to review it , it would probably not have been my first choice (unless I was a hardcore Krisyeol shipper).

Characterization [14/20]

A lot of swearing but I quite like the way you portrayed Sehun and Luhan(separately and as a couple). Kris not so much but that's probably because I am a weird person.

Plot/Originality [15/20]

I haven't had an overall feel for the plot therefore I don't know much what's happening because it seems all over the place and doesn't follow one definite plot line( Is that just me?)

Mechanics (Grammar, Spelling & Punctuation) [3/5]

I think you know that your grammar is a little of but because I understand that English is not your first language I'm going to be lenient on those mistakes.

Reader's Response [5/5]

Your readers seem to enjoy it a lot judging by the comments which I think is great. 

Overall Enjoyment [7/10]

I feel horrible for doing this but overall I half enjoyed this story, not something id go out of my way to read. Mianhae <3

Bonus [3/5]

The way you portrayed Hunhan was super cute.

Total : 56/75

Comments :  Please don't take this to heart as it is only my personal opinion and other people will definitely feel differently about that.