Title 4/5: 
Although it was original, I've seen and heard this title many times on this website. 
But, it did leave me thinking about what was forbidden. Forbidden love? Family?
It left me thinking and that is a good thing.

Description/Foreword 10/10 :
The description and foreword really made me drawn in. The song seemed to be a good addition too. I was really drawn to it. I think that I shouldn't be judging the title of a great story like this. 
Even the one line 'Jonghyun meant a lot to her; more than how he should be.' really clicked it. It was that one line that made me really want to read it.

Characterization 19/20:
The characterization was good. At first, I thought that Eunji was Jonghyun's girlfriend and I was, like, shocked when I found out that she was his sister. Although you didn't say much about Key, I only knew that he loved Jonghyun and will be Eunji's husband soon.

Plot/ Originality 18/20 :
The plot was well thought out. It was a sister that is in love with her brother. Even though it's not very original, you wrote a complicated story from a simple plot, which many great authors do.

Mechanics (Grammar, Spelling, Punctuation) 3/5 :
All the spelling was splendid, for a person that doesn't speak English. I think that you got the punctuation wrong, like you use ' when the characters talk. You need to use " when you're writing dialogue. 

Reader's Response 5/5:
It was a bit short. I wish you would've made it longer. You left me hanging at the end. I wanted to know what had happened in the end. Who does Eunji end up with? What about Key? What will happen to Jonghyun?

Overall Enjoyment 8/10:
I kind of did enjoy and kind of didn't. I thought that the beginning wasn't that exciting. I think that you should've been a bit more descriptive in the scenes.

Bonus 5/5 :
I love the poster! It was very cool! It totally matched the scene and feeling if the story. I hope that you'll create a sequel about what happens in the future.

Total: 72/80

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