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Author : SHylciaMS

Profile Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/637096

Story : 12 Minions?

Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/697129/12-minions-comedy-drama-exo-minions-overdose

Character Development 10/10

It was good so I have nothing to say about it.

Plot 8/10

Your plot was really cute and funny. =^_^=

Originality 10/10

It was really original, I haven't seen anything like it before so great job! I loved it.

Grammar 4/10

Your grammar is really weird and I found myself cringing at almost all of the sentences.

Here are a few examples :

Ex. 1 - Suho and Kris stressed out listening to them because the two leaders didn’t understand any single of it.

Add 'became' after 'Kris', add 'from' after 'out', replace 'any' with 'a', replace 'of it' with 'word'.

Ex. 1 - Suho and Kris became stressed out from listening to them because the two leaders didn't understand a single word.

Ex. 2 - The 11 minions narrowing their eyes on him, clenching their fist and gave a wide grinned.

Okay, that was really bad. You can't give a wide 'grinned'. That's a verb...

Ex. 2 - The 11 minions narrowed their eyes at him, clenching their fists, and