Sorry for reviewing a little late. Anyways, here's your review! I hope you find it helpful~

-kpoploverr6763

Author : nfhafiza

Profile Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/529732

Story : Ludos

Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/659609/ludos-highschool-exo-kai-kris-teenlove

Character Development : (9.5/10)

You did a good job in presenting the characters, but there is one thing that I found really weird and rushed. It was in the beginning where Kim and Sehun were looking at Violet and Kai's backgrounds. You never told us how they got that information and Sehun found out about Violet trying to get back at Amy way too fast. But I liked how you took your time in showing us who the characters are instead of just getting to the point in the 2nd or 3rd chapter.

Plot (10/10)

The plot was really interesting and the 5th chapter made me want to read even farther. It was really great so I don't have anything else to say about it.

Originality (8/10)

There are a lot of fanfics about a player making a bet to make a guy/girl fall for him and then ditch her at the end. And there are others where guys/girls try to make their friends (who betrayed them) jealous by dating their crush. But what I thought was interesting was that you were able to merge those two together and make it even better. ^_^