sushi_sykes

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Author: sushi_sykes

Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/493493

Story Title: (pulling) triggers

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/741865/1/swan-princess-odette-luna-psychological-tragedy-anorexia-fx0p>

 

Charactar Development- 10/10

Since it was a one-shot there's not much to say, except that you expressed her feelings and views on how she looks and feels about herself enough to make me give you a 10 out of 10.

 

Plot- 10/10

It was just so beautiful, the way you described everything.

 

Originality- 10/10

 

Grammar- 10/10

This was so well written, I cried. OTL

 

Spelling- 10/10

 

Total: 50/50

Great job! You capitalized the beginning of sentences and names! Your one-shot was really amazing.

Thank you for choosing La Lune aux Étoiles Review Shop and picking me twice! We all appreciate it! ^^

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snowflake16 #1
Chapter 15: Thank you for the review, xoxoChocie. I've picked up and credited :)
Mi-Yixing-You #2
Chapter 14: Thank you for the review, I'll do my best to change what needs to be change and do the proper edits ^^
I'll credit now ^^
snowflake16 #3
I've requested :)
Mi-Yixing-You #4
Requested for a Review. Thank you in advance.
luqluq #5
Submitted~
sushi_sykes #6
Chapter 12: HIII picking up my reviews!' thank you for the feedback and sorry for the late pick up! hahaa I don't capitalize cause I find that it brings more impact and I'm also lazy like that. hahaha but AWWW I'm sorry if I made you cry ahaha thank you so much!! it means a lot to me (: I'll credit everything tomorrow cause it's almost midnight here teehee thank you ^^
crazytoot #7
Ah this .
sushi_sykes #8
i've requested (:
exoexoexolellel #9
Hello there!
Do you wanna be affies? :D

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/739047
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