Hello :) xoxoChocie here!!! so this is my first review, YAY!!! So, i hope this helps...

Story: Worth the wait

We grade five categories: Plot, character development, grammar, originality and spelling.

Plot: I am really enjoying the story so far, which is a really good thing. The story however is a bit cliche, I feel as f i can predict whats coming next, so surprise your readers a little bit more. For instance i was very shocked when I found out that Taeyoen and Chen were siblings. That was a really good twist. 7/10

character development: i actually like the variety of characters from different groups. i think Baekhyun and Taeyoen go well toegther. There is just one thing that bothers me. I dont understand Taeyoens personality, because in one chapter she is a bit cold and in the next, she sunddenly changes into the caring type. So I dont know what to portray her as. 6/10

grammar: This is always the part i hate when reading a story, but i have to say... your grammar was actually quite exeptional. It was just the use of prepositions sentence wwas used incorrectly. Examples (from chapter 1):

She scrolls down the messages on her phone as she sits by the corner of the club, all alone with no companion, sipping from her drink as she entertained herself by reading her previous messages. by should instead be "in".

the sentences structure wasnt a big problem but i just want to point out one: