Hai! Here is your review from moi, kpoploverr6763! Hope this helps!

Author: Nictaeny9

Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/488617

Story: Dark Ties

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-jessica-romance-snsd-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany-yuri

Character Development (8/10)

I felt that Taeyeon and Tiffany became friends a little to fast over just one question about death on the phone. Yes, I read your A/N about how Taeyeon has always wanted to be closer to Tiffany but I just thought that you should've done something more in the beginning rather than just rush it and make them like each other instantly. But other than that, you made me understand who the characters are and how they felt further into the story so I present you a with ... an 8/10. ^^

Plot (10/10)

The plot is actually really good. It kept me entertained throughout the whole story, and I don't usually read these types of fanfictions. So great job.

Originality (9/10)

Honestly, I thought that the plot of your story was going to be a little cliche when I started reading because I've seen and read a bunch of fanfictions about two different people with dark pasts. But you were able to make it different throughout the chapters.

Grammer (7/10)

Okay, so this is what got me a little confused. When I read the dialogue, I s