Author | Co-Author | Title | Story Link | Genre | Reviewer

Chubbuny | N/A | Lifetime | Link | Angst | Krissy_

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Title: [5/5] 

​A pleasant selection of the title. Although I did presented you full marks for this section but I'm firmly certained that you'll continue to keep up this standard the next time round.

Story Layout: [?/10] - [5/5]

For this section, many requesters will know that I'm not that stringent and will never present a low marks. You're not excluded too, I've to encomium you for putting the effort to make your story look more engaging. However, I'd removed five points from here because you do not have any background and I find it a foul to minus marks from it. So right here, your points is over five which is only the poster marks. Fair and square? I really love how the designer designed the poster, especially how he or she blurred out the grandfather clock. It absolutely matches the title and brought out the suspense feel. 

Foreword & Description: [8/10]

I favored how you leave questions to let the readers think, it'll be sure to hook them in but I'm not really supportive of extracting a part of the story and placing it in the description. Quite similar to revealing the plot unless it's prologue. 

Plot: [15/20]

​It's just another typical story that leave readers a cliff-hanger feeling. 

Characterization: [9/10]

​Not bad for a drabble. As the shot progressed, I enjoyed how you slowly slipped out the reasons why he's feeling this way. I personally still think that you could touch up this shot by adding in more profound, descriptive words.

Originality: [3/5]

​Sorry, but I'd read numerous drabble with the similar plot.

Flow: [10/10]

​Extremely well, no worry. You should try adding in some flasbacks but since it's done then it's fine.

Grammar & Spelling: [25/25]

​Perfection. I'll encouraged more writers to learn from you but I always advice writers to write in past tense unless past-present rules are apllied.

Overall Enjoyment: [3/5]

​Short and sweet, very enjoyable. I also think that you succeeded in bringing out the definition of angst as many writers  are frequently confused with tragedy and angst. Still a beautiful plot, congratulation. 

Bonus points: [2/5] 

​Hi, chubbunny! Thank you so much for requesting at Crisx-Trix Review Shop, it's entertaining working with you. I thinked I knew you through a contest, right? Kekeke, anyway, I sincerely hope that my review was not harsh neither has my words hurt any of you, if I do, I apologize for my mistakes. But this is my job as a reviewer, I've to be honest to help everyone improve including myself. Thanks again for giving me this chance to prove myself. If there're any content that I misread thus leading to a wrong review, please share and correct me, I'm more than wiling to hear it and do some reflection on myself. I wish that we'll be able to work together again! If you enjoyed my review, please share this shop with your friends and an upvote is appreciated. Most importantly, please return some feedbacks at the comment box down below. Bye! ^.~