Author | Co-Author | Title | Story Link | Genre | Reviewer

treehugger | N/A | Summer with Him | Link | Romance| BlackPearl96

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Title: [5/5]

Marvelous title! Simple but intriguing, thats the way to go. It gives it this whimsical, teenage love story feeling ^.^

Story Layout: [10/10]

One can really tell a lot of thought and effort ws put into the look of the story as a whole. it has a very professional look in way of the text, and the background says "summer".

Foreword & Description: [8/10]

Nothing special here. It doesnt really draw one in, but it is accurate, you didnt say it was abut one thing then write about another, which is always good. howver you could do more in this section to draw the reader in. the title makes you want to click, now give readers a reason to read.

Plot: [20/20]

im intrested to see how this will progress. you have an intresting idea, now i would like to see how it all ends ^.^

Characterization: [8/10]

For the most part youre quite descriptive, but sometimes i feel as if more explanaiotn could be put in. i dont like the feeling of jumping, like the charecter starts stnding adn then next time they appear there laying down sipping a martini with no exlanation. but youve done fairly well here

Originality: [5/5]

Well, i think its orignal,Ihavent come across anything quite like it yet.

Flow: [10/10]

It flows quite well. I see no problems here! keep up the good work.

Grammar & Spelling: [25/25]

Not much to say here either. or at all i guess, continue to do well please ^.^

Overall Enjoyment: [5/5]

YAY! I enjoyed it! now update ^.^ 

Bonus points: [5/5]

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