⚔ Review For That Pair of Eyes... ⚔
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Author | Co-Author | Title | Story Link | Genre | Reviewer
Inspirit7_love | N/A | That Pair of Eyes... | Link | Angst | BlackPearl96
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Title: [5/5]
It's an intriguing title. The title doesn't suggest to much, so the story could go in any direction that you please, meaning that reader MUST click find out more about the story to decide if they would like to read your story.
Story Layout: [10/10]
Yeah, your poster definitely suggest angst. Which is quite befitting. The background is also good. Neutral color and doesn't draw too much attention. Which means the reader won't get distracted and will focus their full attention of the written story.
Foreword & Description: [10/10]
Your description is short and sweet. It intrigues readers to find out more. And, by the way, it is nicely presented *two thumbs up*
Plot: [20/20]
It's a different type of story, most certaintly. I typically don't read fiction in which the idol is blind, butthat's ause I can honestly say I haven't seen it before. Which means your offering something different, making readers more inclined to read! Keep up the good, strong work :3
Characterization: [8/10]
There are just a few times where I find myself confused. Like when you said l.joe retreated when he heard her scream. I can infer that she feagain and she came back to help but
1) retreat should be retuned, because I get the initial impression that he left her
2) there is something missing, I feel like you skipped a few sentences because it jumps
Originality: [5/5]
As i said already, its quite unique. *thumbs up*
Flow: [10/10]
The flow is quite nice, and the pace is steady, I have nothing else to say here. Good job ^.^
Grammar & Spelling: [25/25]
.... I didnt catch anything. There were no reoccuring mistakes and if there were in random slips I dont recall them.
Overall Enjoyment: [5/5]
I don't like angst personally, but this was quite well written and I've gotten a good sense of your characters. I believe that for fans of angst, and those who aren't necessarily fans but the occasional reader, will also enjoy your fiction >.<
Bonus points: [4/5]
AYO! Hello, Insipirt7_love ^.^ Thank you so much for requesting at Crisx-Trix Review Shop, it's entertaining working with you. I sincerely hope that my review was not harsh neither has my words hurt any of you, if I do, I apologize for my mistakes. But this is my job as a reviewer, I've to be honest to help everyone improve including myself. Thanks again for giving me this chance to prove myself. If there're any content that I misread thus leading to a wrong review, please share and correct me, I'm more than wiling to hear it and do some reflection on myself. I wish that we'll be able to work together in the future! If you enjoyed my review, please share this shop with your friends and an upvote is appreciated. Most importantly, please return some feedbacks at the comment box down below. Bye! ^.~
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