JUST NIGHTMARE OR A VISION?

UNBEARABLE PAIN

BAE SEUL GI POV

i woke up

and the sun was shining brightly that it was hard to see

it was fall as the trees leaves were falling

i stand up and see that i was at a park

"HELLO? HELLO?!" 

"ANYONE THERE?"

no reply was heard

i sat down on a swing 

as i was lonely no one was there

i swing back and forth 

swinging my legs feeling free

i smile for no reason like a crazy person

then everything changes

its dark black and its winter

i was happy and shiny until it got dark and lonely

i look around terrified 

i started crying 

afraid

i scream

as up ahead were 10 dead bodies

i look at there faces 

wanting to know there identities

i turned their bodies over and gasped and screamed

i identified 7 bodies

..........ara's.......yeonhee's......boa's...........ri in's.......yoochun oppa.......changmin oppa........and junsu oppa 

i turned over one and it was one of the oppa's friends

and i turned the other one over and it was the guy that hit me

i hesitated 

wondering who the last body was 

i turned i over the last body

and continued tocry

as the last body was jaemin oppa's 

i hold onto his body

as his blood was everywherre

i then run to the others crying

as the snow covered floor was drenched with their blood 

i scream for help but no one was there

all of a sudden up ahead i saw men 

not just few but hundreds maybe even a thousand

a familiar looking face comes forward

i walk towards themnow standing only half a mile away from them

i stop

"the blood they shed is your fault," 

"HOW THE HELL IS IT MY FAULT!"

"you will find out soon,"

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HopesAiren
#9
Chapter 31: I'm shedding tears right now. Great story, and stupid girl. She .. she .. dn't know, feel like she gave up and it's breaking me bringing sad memories.
U get the feelingd so it's good.