Thanks for this story. My friend is a big fan of Luhan. I'll show it to her. She will be overjoyed.

Chapter 10: This was certainly an interesting read. I never know what to expect with OCs but this was a nice surprise because she was a robot and therefore in new territory to read. I additionally wasn't sure how Luhan was going to fit in either until I got to the end of the first chapter and things clicked into place. While you give a fair bit of description to Luhan throughout the story, I would have liked to have seen more details about how Hana and the Creator looked. Other than that, it was very interesting to see the way they developed over time.

I must admit that I pitied Hana more than anything. And Luhan's behavior was curious to me since I feel like we didn't get to see many of the behind the scenes interactions that allowed him to become closer to her. I know it happened because of how they interact throughout but I missed the moments other than his brief questioning periods (and the gifts). It was still sweet regardless, since the whole idea of robots having emotions and falling in love is just wonderful anyway. ;)

I especially enjoyed the twist at the end, even if I'm not entirely sure how it came about. Based on everything Hana said/thought about the Creator led me to believe one thing about him and then it changed. But such is life I suppose.

I was however left with a few questions by the end. One of which was the significance of the eye colors. Were they based on mood ring colors by chance? And why wouldn't the Creator be able to explain that since he is the one that programmed Luhan in the first place? I was also curious about how Hana came to be aware at all. The story says she wasn't supposed to initially but she does (apparently) and I'm not sure how the Creator could miss that discrepancy. >.> Or why he would maintain such a facade throughout when he was finally convinced otherwise. You gave a reason but it didn't feel like a strong reason. Does that make sense?

But anyway. I am glad you gave them a happy ending...

Chapter 4: Aw.. Destroyedd???

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Chapter 10: I reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally liked this story author-nim,it is so beautifull!! T_T What i didnt like is that it was too short lol You made an excelent job with this ♥ ♥ ♥

Chapter 10: I loved the story. It was beautifully written, and the end was nice.

Chapter 9: I really hope this is not a trap, and she does have a new body. So nervous...

Chapter 8: Oh, no! Nearing the end, but he is nice to give updates on what Master says. I feel sorry for them both.

Chapter 7: A nice gift. The talk was good for them, also. Still liking it!