Metal Body, Human Soul

Metal Body, Human Soul

 

One Year Later

            “Hana, would you mind going into town with Luhan to help me fetch a few things I’ve ordered? At the usual store.”

            “Yes, Creator.”

            He smiled at me and I smiled back, walking towards Luhan’s room swiftly.

            It’s been a year since I was switched into my new body. A year since my superstitions have been eased. Creator now treats me just as he treats Luhan, if not, better (remarkably).

            After I was transferred into the new body, I found myself with the same bright blue eyes that Luhan had as he woke. They then shifted to a yellow, which Luhan told me about and said it was probably the color of shock.

            I was confused in my new body, and have just barely gotten used to the freedom of this body.

            When I got back to my room that day, I saw a few gifts on my bed, with the words “From Creator and Luhan” scrawled across the top of the first gift. I’d opened one to reveal a beautiful dress, better than any I’d ever owned. It was silky smooth and a pastel blue color, matching the other gifts that Luhan had gotten me before.

            After unwrapping and opening several more gifts, I’d realized that Creator was trying to make up for the previous times of when he treated me awfully. There were innumerous dresses, sashes, pins, shoes, etc, each of a unique color and style.

            I was surprised at the sudden treatment and requested for Creator to return them. He refused of course and to this day, I’ve been treasuring each gift that was given to me.

            “Luhan, Creator wishes for us to go get some things for him in town.”

            Luhan looked up and nodded, closing the book he was flipping through. His eyes shifted from gray to green. “Let me just get a few things. Go ahead and put on your shoes first.”

            I nodded, smiling and walking to my own room to slip on a pair of boots and grabbing a small satchel. By the time I was done, Luhan was already waiting for me at the front door. I have yet to get used to moving so fast.

            The pattern of things seems so much lighthearted than before. Luhan and I would often go into town to fetch things for Creator, who had given us an extra bit of money for something small for ourselves. At home, I was not the only one to do the chores, despite my protests.

            There were more friendly conversations between all of us, and the overall environment was more comfortable. I guess you could say that we were like a family… minus the human factor for two of us.

            "Hana, hurry before I leave you behind!" Luhan's eyes had a cheerful, yet teasing turquoise tone to his eyes as I hurried toward him.

            This new lifestyle… I hope it lasts forever. I never want it to end. I may be a robot, but I cannot suppress my happiness for this human-like life. My metal body can’t hold back my human soul.


It's over TT.TT (OMG accidentally deleted this chapter TT.TT) I hope you guys liked reading through this entire story :) Thanks to all of my subscribers and for the comments~ I hope you guys continue to read my other stories :)

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CARMELLA291100
#1
Thanks for this story. My friend is a big fan of Luhan. I'll show it to her. She will be overjoyed.
Amalya
#2
Chapter 10: This was certainly an interesting read. I never know what to expect with OCs but this was a nice surprise because she was a robot and therefore in new territory to read. I additionally wasn't sure how Luhan was going to fit in either until I got to the end of the first chapter and things clicked into place. While you give a fair bit of description to Luhan throughout the story, I would have liked to have seen more details about how Hana and the Creator looked. Other than that, it was very interesting to see the way they developed over time.

I must admit that I pitied Hana more than anything. And Luhan's behavior was curious to me since I feel like we didn't get to see many of the behind the scenes interactions that allowed him to become closer to her. I know it happened because of how they interact throughout but I missed the moments other than his brief questioning periods (and the gifts). It was still sweet regardless, since the whole idea of robots having emotions and falling in love is just wonderful anyway. ;)

I especially enjoyed the twist at the end, even if I'm not entirely sure how it came about. Based on everything Hana said/thought about the Creator led me to believe one thing about him and then it changed. But such is life I suppose.

I was however left with a few questions by the end. One of which was the significance of the eye colors. Were they based on mood ring colors by chance? And why wouldn't the Creator be able to explain that since he is the one that programmed Luhan in the first place? I was also curious about how Hana came to be aware at all. The story says she wasn't supposed to initially but she does (apparently) and I'm not sure how the Creator could miss that discrepancy. >.> Or why he would maintain such a facade throughout when he was finally convinced otherwise. You gave a reason but it didn't feel like a strong reason. Does that make sense?

But anyway. I am glad you gave them a happy ending...
itstraac #3
Chapter 4: Aw.. Destroyedd???
waaffles
#4
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anaberu
#5
Chapter 10: I reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally liked this story author-nim,it is so beautifull!! T_T What i didnt like is that it was too short lol You made an excelent job with this ♥ ♥ ♥
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 10: I loved the story. It was beautifully written, and the end was nice.
DGNA_Forever
#7
Chapter 9: I really hope this is not a trap, and she does have a new body. So nervous...
DGNA_Forever
#8
Chapter 8: Oh, no! Nearing the end, but he is nice to give updates on what Master says. I feel sorry for them both.
DGNA_Forever
#9
Chapter 7: A nice gift. The talk was good for them, also. Still liking it!