Sunsu: Legend of the Heart

Description

A pure heart... a pure soul... two worlds seperated. Too different to become one, the Legends figure out the mysteries behind themselves, their existence and their own histories, as well as the key to their victory over the Red Forces.

 


Introduction; "Legend of Sunsu, Legend of the Heart"

 

Once upon a time... long ago in the ancient time, a giant tree lived to support the world. Its heart was the essence of every living creature in the world. It was nurturing the earth, watching the humankind, giving them knowledge and protecting them. Humans called the tree as Tree of Life and the heart as Sunsu as it had the purest and the kindest soul among the living.

 

Along with the Tree, there was a group of 12 guardians that called the Legends. They were each blessed by a special power. It was their task to nurture and guard the tree of life. For years, they kept their task without fail as well as to keep the peace among humankind.

 

Then, one day, an eye of Red Forces created the evil. Slowly, it coveted the heart of Tree of Life and consumed it. Thus, the Heart slowly grew dry as the evil grew strong and spread. It brought war and chaos among the humankind.

 

Knowing that the world had slowly consumed by the evil, the Legends took actions to tend and embrace the Heart of the tree of life. The legends decided to divide the tree in half and hide each side.

 

Hence, time is over-turned and space turns a skew. The twelve forces divide into two and create two suns that look alike into two worlds that seem alike. The legends travel apart. The legends shall now see the same sky but shall stand on different grounds, shall stand on the same ground but shall see different skies.

 

But unknown for them, an undivided part of the Heart had escaped as the time over-turned. It was traveled apart between two worlds that the Legends had created, escaping from the eye of the evil and Red Forces. For long, it was floating through time. Until one day, it touched a single entity of life, an unborn child from a female human.

 

Born from a human, it took a form of a human child with a great power of purification as the child was meant to purify the Red Force and restore the peace once again.

 

Therefore, the time of the Tree that once had stopped began to move.

 

Soon, there will come the day the grounds be kept a single file before one sky in two worlds that seem alike where the legends will greet each other. The day will come where the red force is purified and the twelve forces will reunite into one perfect root.

 

Then, a new world shall begin.

 

 


 

This story happens in the world that we know as EXO. When the time overturned, the world had divided into two, the world of M and the world of K. These paraleled worlds may seem to look alike but each world lives with their own culture, language and structure. Although people know about another world's existence, they never really know about the world as no one can across between the worlds. Lack of knowledge and mysterious barrier have prevented them.

 

Chunjie: a teenage girl with great power. She lives in the world of M along with the Legends. Her true power is never been known as she has never unleashed her true power.

Hana: a teenage girl who lives with the Legends of world K. A perfect beauty but has mysterious and dark aura around her. Very powerful but no one knows her true intention.

 

The Legends are:

 

                                    

Kris                                               Suho

 

                                   

Lay                                               D.O.

 

                                  

    Tao                                          Chanyeol

 

                                  

Luhan                                            Kai

 

                                    

Chen                                            Sehun

 

                                   

Xiumin                                        Baekhyun

 

Foreword

~ooOOOoo~

 

 

Chunjie stopped in the middle of the street and turned to them. Her hair fluttered even though there was no wind around her. Her eyes were fixed to the enemies in front of her as she gathered her power.

 

“No,” Kris said as he realized what she intended to do. “Chunjie, stop!”

 

The other guys also realized what she was about to do. It wasn’t their first time to see her pressing out her great power. And they knew how she would be if she did it. Her condition was too weak to release her power because of the impure world. The Red forces had weakened her. Luhan and Lay quickly ran toward her. Both of them wanted to stop the girl from releasing her power.

 

But Chunjie’s body started to glimmer in pure white aura. She lowered her head and closed her eyes. And suddenly, a blast of light power came out from her. The wave traveled fast and strong to every direction. It banished the Red creatures.

 

But since the power was too strong, Luhan and Lay got struck by the power and got thrown to the back. Chen, Xiumin, Tao and Kris quickly protected themselves. The power also wiped out Kris’ dragon and dismissed Tao’s power to stop the time. The people started to move around them, feeling confused with the chaos that happened.

 

The great blast of power brought surprise to the Legends, especially for Kris and Tao. For the first time, they knew that Chunjie could neutralize their power. But then, their shock was replaced by worry as they knew that Chunjie was too weak to handle such a great power.

 

The girl still stood on her place with her head hung and her eyes closed. The white aura had disappeared from her. But something had prevented everyone to come near her. They also saw wind swirling around her. She raised her head and opened her eyes.

 

But the moment Chunjie opened her eyes and fixed her gaze on him, Luhan heard her voice inside his mind.

 

Tell them my apology. Not to worry as I will leave for a while.’

 

Leave where?’ Luhan tried to ask.

 

To mend the broken ties.’

 

It happened so fast. The next thing that Luhan could remember, Chunjie had vanished from his sight.

 

 


 

This is the new story about EXO, specially for Kris and Suho.

Inspired by their EXOPlanet legend, I created this story.

I won't be greedy as I still have few fics that I need to finish before. So, I will leave the reader with this short introduction.

 

Even though I know that EXO is divided into EXO-M that uses Chinese and EXO-K that uses Korean, I will use the English language for the whole conversations inside the story. And, the personality that I portray for each member can be different from the real personality of them.

 


 

Thanks to IcePrincess2299 for the introduction of EXO Planet Legend. I know that it originally came from EXO's MAMA MV. But I got it from you, so I want to thank you for it~ ^^ And, my ears are too bad to hear what the narrator said on the MV. So, thank you so much.

Thanks to xODarkMistOx for the guidance and short Description up ahead.

 

Credit to mrskailu at violetkecil poster shop for the poster.

 

And for the *future* readers, enjoy the story. Comments and Subscribers are very much welcomed.

 

Reviews:

1. Review from Sparkling Jewels Shop : here. Thanks to IcePrincess2299 for the review.

2. Review from LoL Review Shop : here. CREDIT TO YeoJaGaSu FROM LoL REVIEW SHOP FOR THIS AWESOME REVIEW

2. Review from On Glory's Edge: here. CREDIT TO xODarkMistOx FROM On Glory's Edge Review Shop for the review. Thank you for your honesty. I'm really appreciated it although I got bad score. For sure, it didn't damp my mood. It pumps me up for revision. Thanks again~

 

- alize_sakura - January 3rd, 2013

 

Updated: Major Revision. Deleting chapter 2 onward. - Alize Sakura - August 26th, 2013

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LazilyArtisticXox #1
Chapter 14: Gosh! I'm sorry author nim but can't you just kill Hanna so my dear Kai will change back? XD
KAIra88
#2
Chapter 14: OMG WHAT HAPPENED TO KAI!? :O
nuneno #3
Chapter 14: Im getting more curious and curious lol
Goodjob authornim❤
LazilyArtisticXox #4
Chapter 13: Yay! More! More! More! Haha :) Thank you for updating
LazilyArtisticXox #5
Update? Please?
OppaJjang98 #6
Chapter 12: Ahh, so interesting!!! I totally Love this story<3 I'm so curious, can't wait to know more about EVERYTHING!!! The plot is awesome, the characters too, and i adore your writing style!!! I'm Glad i found this story:)
LadySyndra #7
Chapter 12: Lovely chapter!
LadySyndra #8
Chapter 11: Looking forward to the next chapter!!! I hope Kai soon realises that Hana is manipulating all of them and isn't the nice person he thinks she is....
Please update soon!
fantasy49
#9
Helloooooooo please update this soon ^^ I love this soooooooo much :D
_uniquelynghi #10
Chapter 11: thank you for the update~ c: