Sunsu : Legend of The Heart - alize_sakara
Sparkling Jewels {Closed}
Story Title: Sunsu : Legend of The Heart
Author: alize_sakura
Story Link: Sunsu : Legend of The Heart
Title (3/5):
Firstly, there shouldn't be an extra spacing after 'Sunsu'. One spacing is just fine :3
Next, I would like to point out that the addition of 'Sunsu' is a bit... Well, unless you're planing out an series to this fic, I see no point in adding 'Sunsu' to it. It's not a real English word so I think your readers might be a bit confused when they see it.
Appearance (3/5):
You made the poster yourself, didn't you? LOL. It's nice but I think you should request for one since it's pretty plain.
Foreword / Description (7/10):
No offense but maybe you shouldn't place that 'Introduction' image there. When a reader searches the tag for a fic to read, AFF will only show the first few words of your description but if an image is first (like yours), AFF won't display anything save for an eclipse. And since your title isn't really that interesting, it's really rare for a reader to actually click on your story and read it so maybe you can just remove the image?
Other than that, everyth
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