Story Title: Our Confession

Author: Inspiritb2uty

Story Link: Our Confession

Title (3/5):
It isn’t terrible, but it sounds a bit awkward and doesn’t make very much sense, at least so far in the story. The title almost implies that more than one person is confessing the same exact thing at the same time and are together as a team of some sort. Also, it doesn’t fit with the point of view. I’m assuming, from the five chapters I’ve read, that Myungsoo and Joon will be the ones confessing. The problem with this is that their parts of the story would be told from the 3rd person point of view and the title is in 1st person. It would make sense the way you have it if the words in the title actually come out of either Myungsoo’s or Joon’s dialogue, but the story hasn’t gotten that far yet. Even if this will be the case in the future, I feel that it would be better to make “Confession” plural so it doesn’t seem like the two are in it together. Overall, though I myself am not very good with coming up with titles, I don’t know about this one. I bet you could probably come up with something a bit more creative.

Appearance (5/5):
I like the poster a lot and I feel that it goes well with the storyline. I’m not sure if you planned it that way, but the girl’s shirt is what really got me to like it. Although the story hasn’t gotten very far yet, I can tell that Hyerin will have to “Stop and Think.”

Foreword/Description (7/10):
I like the quotes in the description a lot, but they have some grammar issues and awkwardness. The character descriptions are the same way, but I think the photos you chose for the characters are nice.

Plot/Originality (22/25):
Although the plot hasn’t complet