Story Title: Tonight With You

Author: XxYukiCrossxX

Story Link: Tonight With You

Title (4/5):
I really liked your title! It may be something I would skip over just browsing for stories, but it's cute and fluffy, just like your story. You did a good job selecting something that reflects what your story is about. Same with the chapter title. It was cute and really gave me an idea of what to expect.

Appearance (-/5)
No points taken off here.

Foreword / Description (7/10):
Your description was good. Short and sweet. But your foreward-- I liked it at first, but when I saw it was the exact same as the first few lines in your story, my face fell a little. With short little drabbles like yours, you should make your foreward something that's not in your actual story. With chaptered fics, this would be fine, but because of the length of yours, I kind of felt cheated out of some of the story. But it was so very cute, so I didn't take many points off.

Plot / Originality (18/25):
I've never seen a drabble quite like this-- it's good! Just focusing on one event is common, but the way you wrote it... It made it original. However, there's not really a plot in it. I can see that Donghae and Eunhyuk sleep together, but it never really explained why. Maybe a little background would be good, to get it a little more solidity, and more length.

Grammar / Spelling (30/30):
Perfect! A