Story Title: The Legends: Messengers

Author: Navi_7769

Story Link: The Legends: Messengers

Title (5/5):

I love your title! It aroused curiosity in me and I would definitely click on your story if I happened to see it!

Appearance (5/5):

I love everything- your poster, banner, background and font. Good job!

Foreword / Description (10/10):

I love your foreword & description! Your description was very well written and it didn’t give out too much about your story.

Plot / Originality (25/25):

I love your plot and it was really original! It's my first time reading a story like yours so full marks again hurhur.

Grammar / Spelling (20/30):

This is the area where you lose marks. There are grammar errors in every chapter so I would recommend you to go and edit out your mistakes!

Flow (6/10):

At first it was going quite slow, then after a few chapters your flow was going alright, then it started going too fast. When Kai and Sora was finding Luhan, D.O, Lay, Baekhyun and a few others it took quite a few chapters but when it came to Kris and Chanyeol it only took a chapter or two... :( this is quite saddening for me because I'm Chanyeol-biased.

Enjoyment (15/15):

I really enjoyed your story, despite the grammar and spelling errors! I love the way you write, and I'm off to the sequel now hehe.

Total (86/100):

Congrats you got an A