1. I didn't expect this story to become so popular- it blows me away everytime I check this story for comments to see the number of people that are subscribed and reading it. Really I know it lacks in so many areas and I'm not faking the humility but thank you all still.

2. This was the first time I ever used slash- and it is so mild that it's probably barely noticeable. For someone who usually writes about heteroual pairings I cannot believe that I got around to trying something new.

Things I did well

1. Keeping you all on edge. You didn't know what was going to happen until the next chapter.

2. Making you feel angry or angsty. I applaud myself at succeeding in that regard.

Things I could have done a whole heap better on.

1. Pacing. If you felt it was too fast in places then yes you are right. I could have slowed it down a bit more which would have been just as dramatic as it was for anything super speedy.

2. The 'pyschological' matter. For my first attempt at the genre I cannot say I am satisfied with my result. It feels as though I did more action or thriller than actual psychological. Blame me for not reading enough about the actual theme itself.

3. The ending. Probably not what everyone wanted (unless you shipped them) and I think I left some things unanswered. If I ever do a sequel (and I doubt I will) then I may try to resolve some of the plot holes then.

4. The planning. Next time I should do a plotline instead of a general gist and playing it by ear. Helps me to keep things consistent and know exactly what comes next.

Well that's my final thoughts on this fic. Leave me feedback in comments or PM's if you honestly have a bone to pick with me and I may see you in other fics of mine, on my blog or wall. Until then take care.