scar 4

the scar in my heart is you

My god it was the beast date ever he toke me to the carnival and we had lot of fun we played and we ate he even won me the cutest teddy bear ever it was ham taro teddy bear ` don’t you just love that cute thing` .. After the carnival he took me for a drive he said he had a surprise for me ` I love surprises `
After a while we were out for the village just little bet outside of it it was beautiful field fell with flowers beautiful coolers every were it was simply breath taking

"Yunho this is beautiful `"

"Will `smile` beautiful surprise for a beautiful angle "making me plush `HARD`

"Thank you yunho this is the beast birthday ever"

"glad that you liked it , " he toke my hand to his making my heart skip and we walked hands in hand in tell we reached the middle of the field the he turned around making his face just an inch a way from main and he start;

" jae ,, I I have never meet any one like you before ` I can tell he was nervies` " the first time that I saw you I thought you were an angle come down from heaven `my eyes gone teary` and the truth is I knew exactly where the plant was I just want an excuse to spend some time with you ` my heart is skipping` ` the truth is I ,, umm will I love you Kim jae joong ` o my god` I have been in love with you from the moment I saw you I know I was in love with you `I couldn't breathe ` and I want to protect you, you’re my other half you jae joong you are my soul so , jae joong would you do me the honor of being my boyfriend ? ` I just died and went to haven `

I was so shock I couldn't say anything I just stood not able to move t couldn’t do anything I was frozen

" I guess that a no ha " what are you kidding me am so happy that I couldn’t speak

"No it ,, YES , yeas yes I will be your boyfriend `tears` I love you too yunho I love you too " I couldn’t control my tears any more I just got my birthday wish come true he love me too isn’t that itself a miracle
And then he kissed me he kissed me it was so sweet, and so tender, this is the beast birthday ever.

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%%% alwayes keep the faith %%%%

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kristalesa #1
Chapter 26: and yeah... she had returned. had to re-read from chap 1 to reminisce the plot ^^ still some words were quite confusing that I had ro think twice as ti what it means. Perhaps you can get a beta-reader? This story is too beautiful that it would be a waste not to be shared to more readers, right?
sunshineonu #2
Chapter 26: yep it's time for siwon to move on from jae..
sunshineonu #3
Chapter 26: woww..thank you dear author..
reading it right now.
sunshineonu #4
dear author..
can we hope for an update for this lovely fic..
pls don't abandon ..
Graciela24 #5
Chapter 2: Te puedo decir que en mi opinión escribes bien y tu historia es Linda,gracias.
kristalesa #6
Your story is very good that’s why imp sticking up with it. It is simple yet very interesting. I may have pity siwon since he had been harboring feelings for jae for quite some time but I am happy that you are kind enough to give him a very good partner. If you want to lengthen your story more and had ran out of conflict, try bringing yunjae’s mom back. I will be waiting for the next update ^.^
kristalesa #7
You really have problems with the grammar that the reader tends to misunderstand some scenes and take a lot of time to comprehend what was happening but then again, every writer starts with grammar and spelling difficulties. Just keep on writing and make sure to read articles about the usages of words. You always mistake broke for brock and others. Read the dictionary handbook and don’t be too harsh on yourself. Take it easy and in due time, you may be able to perfect it. Before posting your story, try to encode it using the Microsoft office word first. It will help you correct your mistakes.
Willidingding #8
great story :)
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