scar 3

the scar in my heart is you

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A month later
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It my birthday tomorrow and as a birthday present I want `a kiss` from a certain someone AKA `Jung yunho `god I really want ` confess` to him but what if got rejected I don’t want to ever have a broken heart I know what a broken heart can do to people it not a pretty sight.

am really am all ready head over heels in love with him.

"Ya Kim jade joong are you home?" I heard him called for me ` great jae joong now you hearing voices` , but

"Ya Kim jade joong are you home ?"

What the OK OK don’t panic just go and check it out ,so I went to the direction of his voice just to make sure I wasn’t crazy , and I knew where he was, he was standing out said my house on the balcony it just a glass door between us so I opened the curtains and there he was ` I smiled ` so I UN- locked the door for him.

"ya Jung yunho what the hell are you doing her aren't you suppose to be in Seoul and why are you `pointing my finger at him` shouting my name `pointing my finger at me` in the middle of the night ?"

He walked in and said my house to the living room and I followed him from behind.

"First- I wasn’t shouting,
Second – it only 11; 30,
And third` his voice soften` – happy birthday Jae "he know when my birth day is I didn’t remember my own birth day.

"ya paop it not my birthday tell like tomorrow so you didn’t have to come all the way from Seoul just to tell me that "`am so happy that he did

"You should know even if I were in Mexico fighting bulls I wouldn't miss on your birthday for the world …"

`dam you Jung yunho you just made me full for you all over again .` I can tell that Tears were forming in my eyes` no one had ever remembered my birthday before and no one ever remembered it after`

" so you're telling me that you came all the way here just to wish `sob` me `sob` happy birthday ` sniff` "

"Of course, now why are you crying papo" wiping my tears a way

"It just that `sob` no `sob` no one remembered my birthday anymore `sob` not since my parents died `sob`, I never celebrate it anymore either I don’t think `sob` I don’t think that it ` sob `important"

"We friends aren't we `hugging me gently` I like to think am your family too, beside your birthday is important it the day you were born, so it very important to me so thank you for being born jae joong " {An-I like you are beautiful a lot .loll}

The only thing I did was cry in his arms he felt do worm I never want to let go ever, I bulled myself away from him felling extremely awkward by the hug

"But it not my birthdays tell tomorrow you know?" I said softly.

"I know but I want to be your first "my what oh god my face turned from pink to red ` naughty thought were going throw my head`.>\\<

"My what?" `Blinking eyes`

"I mean I want to be your first birthday wisher" oh `so naughty `

"Will I have to go now but tomorrow am taking you out" `smiling at me `

"Were we going?"I was curious

"Tomorrow you will know `for now good night Jae joong
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"Good night yunho"

"Don’t forget ill pick you up at 1 araso"

"Araso "I nodded and he left

I was happy I was really happy that night dancing like crazy on my bed singing `tomorrow I love you I ill love you tomorrow and it only a day away`
Yes tomorrow is only day away …..

Never in my 18 no 19 years that I have ever been so excited about my birthday like this I couldn't sleep at night and my throat hurt from all the singing I now heat `Anne` and her stupid song .
But, Early that morning my uncle or as I like to call him `Satan ` decided to make me a visit, I never liked any of his visit they always end up with us almost killing each other.

'' So what can I do for you uncle?" I roll my eyes at him `I really don’t like him at all ` back then when my father died he gave him legal custody over me but my uncle binge himself stole all my money except the house cause it was written under my name but now he want it he said he need it for his new project ` new project my ` ill never give it to him.

"is that away to greet your uncle your family " I can see the smirk on his face ` `

"Were not family not any more, not since you stole my money away remember ...Uncle" he is seriously piss me off

"Huh I never stole anything from you that money belong to me so I simply took it back" I know he was getting mad

"Cut the bull uncle, what you want?" I want to get rid of him as soon as possible `I have a date with destiny you know `

"Mind your language boy … I want the house"

" first it my house I can talk as I wish and please , second ill never ever not in a million years , not if hell freeze over that ill give the house to you "

"You will give it wither you like it or not Jae remember I won't be so generous next time "now he was angry and ready to leave

"What ever, now if you don’t main uncle get the out of MY house" and I smirked at him just to piss him off

"You'll regret it mark my word "and he left ``sigh` it always like this the truth is if he just asked me nicely I would have gave it to him but you can always wish for so much ha .

Anyway yunho was there on time and I was so happy and so nerviest I couldn’t even say hello to him properly, `you would be you if you were me ` but happy more less

"Shall we go" he asked

"Yes let go" and I gave him the biggest smile ever I wasn’t gonna let my uncle
Spoil my date = =

---------always keep the faith----------

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kristalesa
#1
Chapter 26: and yeah... she had returned. had to re-read from chap 1 to reminisce the plot ^^ still some words were quite confusing that I had ro think twice as ti what it means. Perhaps you can get a beta-reader? This story is too beautiful that it would be a waste not to be shared to more readers, right?
sunshineonu #2
Chapter 26: yep it's time for siwon to move on from jae..
sunshineonu #3
Chapter 26: woww..thank you dear author..
reading it right now.
sunshineonu #4
dear author..
can we hope for an update for this lovely fic..
pls don't abandon ..
Graciela24 #5
Chapter 2: Te puedo decir que en mi opinión escribes bien y tu historia es Linda,gracias.
kristalesa
#6
Your story is very good that’s why imp sticking up with it. It is simple yet very interesting. I may have pity siwon since he had been harboring feelings for jae for quite some time but I am happy that you are kind enough to give him a very good partner. If you want to lengthen your story more and had ran out of conflict, try bringing yunjae’s mom back. I will be waiting for the next update ^.^
kristalesa
#7
You really have problems with the grammar that the reader tends to misunderstand some scenes and take a lot of time to comprehend what was happening but then again, every writer starts with grammar and spelling difficulties. Just keep on writing and make sure to read articles about the usages of words. You always mistake broke for brock and others. Read the dictionary handbook and don’t be too harsh on yourself. Take it easy and in due time, you may be able to perfect it. Before posting your story, try to encode it using the Microsoft office word first. It will help you correct your mistakes.
Willidingding #8
great story :)