scar 21

the scar in my heart is you

 

"So you still haven't answer my question  jae , `smile` do you still love me ?"

"that is a real tough question yunho " looking  down .

"not really , it simple , ether you do or you don’t "

"it not that simple "

"why not "

"it not if I love you or not , it just that I don’t know how to love anymore , I just spend the last five years of my life heart Brocken about you , I have a huge scar in my heart yunho , for me love `sigh` I don’t , I just don’t know how to "

"ok " he got up and sat in front of jae joong holding on to his hand "ok than let figure it out together , you and me , let us start new , fresh, let me heel your heart "

"but"

"no but , no nothing if there is something I know for sure is that I love you , I love you only you with all of my heart "`jae smiled` " beside we have a son together , beautiful , miracles son "

"but, `pitting his lip ` rant you at least a little mad , a…"

"no but `smile` I don’t care you had your reasons and there good , I get it , you want to protect him `jae nod` so am not mad not at all "

" but you have a son yunho a wife two `in a low voice` you don’t need us `sob`"

"silly `smile` I do have a son and `jae heart loped` an ex-wife "

"huh"

"ex-wife jae ex , beside , I always need you jae , now , tomorrow and forever "

"but , what if you Brock my heart yunho , `sob` am scared am `sob"

"I wont , not this time , I would rather die than to breack you heart , I promise "

"if I do this , if I gave you a chance , it , it would be the last time , I wont , I , if you Brock your promise I would never forgive you  under stand that not ever "

"`smile` is that mean " jae nodded and yunho smiled like he never did before .

"umm `looking in tow his eyes ` jae "

"umm "

"can I kiss you "

"yes `blush` you can kiss me " yunho leaned forward toward him making jae joong heart beat like crazy , his  body gun hot , and his main went else were .

The moment there lips touch there soul was lifted and it was almost heavenly and everything suddenly mad since a gain , and the felt hull .

Firework , bird , and violin .

Just like , exactly like their first kiss .

And it felt magically.

Suddenly the elevator door opened and the scene of the two kissing was seen by everyone .

"so , this is what you two been doing wail we were worried sick about you " top smirk

"shut up" yunho shouted , and jae just blush , suddenly something caught his eyes "way are you two holding hands .

Top smirked , and jinki looked away blushing .

 

.Tbc….. 

.always keep the faith 

 

 

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kristalesa
#1
Chapter 26: and yeah... she had returned. had to re-read from chap 1 to reminisce the plot ^^ still some words were quite confusing that I had ro think twice as ti what it means. Perhaps you can get a beta-reader? This story is too beautiful that it would be a waste not to be shared to more readers, right?
sunshineonu #2
Chapter 26: yep it's time for siwon to move on from jae..
sunshineonu #3
Chapter 26: woww..thank you dear author..
reading it right now.
sunshineonu #4
dear author..
can we hope for an update for this lovely fic..
pls don't abandon ..
Graciela24 #5
Chapter 2: Te puedo decir que en mi opinión escribes bien y tu historia es Linda,gracias.
kristalesa
#6
Your story is very good that’s why imp sticking up with it. It is simple yet very interesting. I may have pity siwon since he had been harboring feelings for jae for quite some time but I am happy that you are kind enough to give him a very good partner. If you want to lengthen your story more and had ran out of conflict, try bringing yunjae’s mom back. I will be waiting for the next update ^.^
kristalesa
#7
You really have problems with the grammar that the reader tends to misunderstand some scenes and take a lot of time to comprehend what was happening but then again, every writer starts with grammar and spelling difficulties. Just keep on writing and make sure to read articles about the usages of words. You always mistake broke for brock and others. Read the dictionary handbook and don’t be too harsh on yourself. Take it easy and in due time, you may be able to perfect it. Before posting your story, try to encode it using the Microsoft office word first. It will help you correct your mistakes.
Willidingding #8
great story :)